More pls

Keep your cool by thinking about food! :D
Anyways, I just realized you don't use the sibling's English names that much, Leo and Luna, from what I can remember? Sorry, Its been a long time since I've watched Yugioh 5ds.

the story is very good hope you update soon

Please update more chapters soon!

i feel for her. Crazy people seem to surround me too.

Hey this story is great! But in the beginning of the story the guys name was Solus and then it some how changed to Solum? Kinda confused but I really hope you continue! (THIS STORY IS AWESOME)

I'm confused. Didn't Jack give back Stardust Dragon right before the Fortune Cup.

Please update soon!

And please please please please! Just make it yuseixoc not akixyusei!

I hate it and i kinda like it if this story would be about him and your oc!

Please just make it!

Update soon!

PLEASE UPDATE! I'm in love with this story! It's soo good! You're a very talented writer! Please don't give up!

I really enjoy this story, so please update it soon. You still have fans.

Cool hope you do more soon :D

in a desperate attempt to reignite my interest in this show, i decided to read some stories but u haven't updated in like a year! D: oh well. hopefully u'll finish some day. i really like alyssa's chara nad i like the stakes u set up as well. hope u come back to this!

Is this gopnna be updated soon?

Please say that it will , I really like it :)

Realistic... well, on certain points. To me, it seems that you are trying to take the easy way while writing this. The descriptions have only the barest minimum, and most of it is dialogue or the character doing something. Can't you write, from time to time, a few paragraphs on what she is thinking? Some descriptions of the monsters? Work on defining your characterization via actions instead of dialogue?

Oh, and if you don't want it for her to be mistaken for a Mary-Sue, then cut the scenes where she gets hurt by walking into a pole, and cut even more the ones where she is then helped by a character.

Make her show more gratitude for the fact that the twins gave her a home. I don't know, make her bake 'em a cake or something. It does not have to be complicated, you just have to make her more thankful. Instead of her lamenting on the fact that she attracts 'weird people', make her realize, like any person would realize in her situation, just how lucky she is. Were it not for the twins, she might have been stuck in the hospital because the law states that minors need parents to get out, or if she got out, she'd be on the streets.

I was already wincing when she was accepted too easily, but now...

I'm starting to wonder if I should take your story off my favourite list.

I'm starting to see a patern amongst reviewers, especially those of my stories (because I read all-and I mean ALL-the reviews I get).

There are those that are blinded by the great plot, unable to see the Mary-Sue-ism and how everything falls into place, the grammar erros here and there, and the mistakes when it comes to ponctuation. Mostly thopugh, they do not see how easily a character is romanticly swayed towards the primary character in the fanfic.

And there are those that are next to never biased, and are capable of intelligent and constructive critism.

Now, you can ignore this, thinking it is just a random reader sending you a flame, or you can see that if I spent all my time writing such a long review just to insult you, then there is something wrong about the situation. As in, this is a critique meant for you to improve.

After all, I did not just send a two-worded review saying, "You suck!".

#Piece of advice: Reading books help a whole bunch. And thouroughly researching the subject of your fiction, too.

Oh, and please do not send me a message saying that a 15-years-old brat like me does not know what she is talking about, 'cause I can tell you that my whole life is dedicated to reading and commenting, and that my library is filled with at least 345 books, and that is the amount I counted six months ago. Since then, I have bought myself a whole lot more.

I'm blunt, and can be quite a bitch, but It is the honest truth.

Despite my un-inspiring rant, I must inform you that the plot is great, the style original, and that this inspires me greatly.

Thank you for publishing such a marvellous story. I love those that possess OC from our world.

Perhaps your next story could be about Yusei coming into our world, and befriending a fan of Yu-Gi-Oh. The best would be that since he is in another world, he does then not participate in the Fortune Cup, and that would give us a very enraged Goodwin that can not kill Yusei's friends, because then he wouldn't have anymore blackmail material.

Well, that was just me, rambling random stuff that flits through my mind.

Sayonara!

I love this story! I wish you can update this soon because I really want to know what happens next!