OMG This can not be over!

Those last lines are perfect. Very profound.

Oh crap. Now I really have to read these books. I'm all anxious for the characters and I don't even really know anything about them. XD I feel attatched to them already.

Ohh...ouchies for my beloved Zsadist! That was totally mean but I loves it!

I can totally picture Zsadist and Phury having this conversation..

I love them both!

Perfect interraction between the twins. They know eachother so well, you got them pushing all the right buttons! Great dialogue. Please, please, please write more!

That was a great story. I love how you got both of the twins down to the T. Phury with his constant worrying about Z and Zsadist being so stubborn about everything.

Thank you for letting see some of the missing moments in BDB you writing is truly wonderful and I very much enjoy taking the time to reading your stories.

i loved your story. Z and Phury were like how they are in the books. they are 2 of favorite brothers.

Fabulous! It is so rare to find BDB fanfiction, especially so well-written :-D Thanks a lot for this! I like the angle you used to show this moment between Phury and Z - presenting Z as the addict, when we always took for granted that Phury is the addict in this series. I also like the way you linked it with the fact Phury knew Bella was pregnant, and the reason why he decided to keep silent. Awesome job! :-D

You really have nailed both Z and P. It's funny how they're so similar, and know each other so well, but each struggles to know himself. Love your insight.

Crack dealer *snort*. Of course, like you said, "an addict could always spot another addict." Is this part of Z's pull on you? Haha. I'm glad you've been reading these books "hard" so I can enjoy some more of my own crack - (good) fanfiction!

Off to read more fanfic.

That so so some kind of brilliance!

I've just read all of your stories in quick succesion and I've loved ever single word of them, This one in particular is amazing.

The insite you have...

I love Zsadist too, he so deserves to be loved and he has an incredible soul i think.

Thank you thank you for sharing this and please please do write more.

That was PHENOMINAL! I loved every word. ! My heart wrenched at Z burying himself in her scent, admitting to Phury he'd bonded, admitted that she was better off without him.

You got them both down perfectly. Amazing job.

Even though we've already discussed this... yes... the dagger was great! Love all three of your fics! You got Z and Phury down, female!

SSVD