MOAR

I came back and just finished re-reading your story, because I still like it. Oi, I just realized it's been over 3 years since your last update. I hope one day you decide to continue, if you haven't forgotten about it. I'd love to know what happens next :D

vaati really REALLY oh well good thing she i mean he is a fairy and not a bad guy

links an animal HAHAHAHAH good one :)

it's HYLIAN!

but other than that this chapter is fine

Wow, I very much like this! I have to admit, when I was looking through stories I was focusing on L x DL ones. When I found this one, I figured there wouldn't be any romance after reading about 2 Chapters, but I still read it and I loved it! However because of this, I wasn't expecting the kiss to happen and my heart actually skipped a beat~ Ahaha, I haven't gotten that feeling from a story in about 2 years (it's a good thing)! I love build up, and you've done a great job with explaining the adventure and so on. And I love how they're slowly getting more comfortable around each other (oh, and Vaati, I LAUGHED so hard when I figured out the fairy was Vaati!)

The only suggestion I have for now though, would be to read over each chapter a few times before you post it. I found quite a few typos, and a few times I had to re-read a sentence about 3 times or so to understand what you really meant.

I really hope you decide to continue this, I very much like it! 3

Vaati is so freakin hilarious I'm crying:) Love it! great story so far. Unique.

uuuhmmm...

Is this on hiatus? Or dead? Cause it would be a shame to let it to waste...

um wow Link is just kissing people outof the blue that unlike him but oh well

nice work so far

yayz go link for helping dark out

well Link is now just a prisoner to ganon weird how he just tourtures link

and dark is caring for him i wonder why

Aw, poor Dark Link. XD Not so fun the first time transporting, eh?

GO LINK!

Geez, these two make an epic team. XD

Wow, this is so amazing! You're one of those great story writers that people don't find very often... I'm excited to read more. :D

Wow! Wasn't expecting that! [the kiss] Link's just danger-prone. I love how Link is like "We gotta save 'em!" and Dark Link is like "Whatever." It reminds me of Luke and Han respectively (Star Wars) I can COMPLETELY picture Link going up to the Gerudo and asking them for membership. Though, I'm pretty sure it's the Desert Colossus and the rock carving is the Spirit Temple. [you had one of the Gerudos call the Temple the Colossus] All in all, nice chapter!