i love dark's personality and how link seems to be a little annoyed by it! it made me laugh and my crazy imagination made these really funny images appear! *starts to giggle like an idiot*

Hm, I have a tip for dialogue. When two characters are talking, it would be better to skip to the next line to start the next person's speech rather than keep it all in the same sentence. It makes it easier to read.

But other than that, all is cool. :)

*AK*

O_o;

Wow, amazing! Your word choice really grabs the reader, and your grammar is beyond decent! Overall, your story gives a touch of horror and suspense (which is definitely a good thing) and I see promise in more emotion jarring chapters!

*AK*

~chapter 5~

Sorry, I didn't finish reading the chapter before I sent the review.

Yeah shes kinda hyper like that...

Taira?

Yes?

Shut up...

OMG! Why do I think it's Vaati?

The purple gives it away dumbass...

Oh shut up Taira!

Aw. This chappy was long overdue. No matter. It was well worth the wait!

This story is really cool. I'm still waiting for an update!

Loved it! Please add more soon!

Aw poor Darky i'd get sick too dont worry...tho ya gotta admit u wud probably get sicker if u went in the Shadow Temple O.O

Aw poor dark, stuck in an ice cave but at least he found a fairie! w kwii~

Yeahseys an update after God knows how long. :) Good chapter though I seriously doubt the lock is magic but I understand people didn't know as much back then about locks.

BTW: It's called a skeleton key system and there are only a few combinations world-wide which is one of the reasons they went obsolete and replaced by our modern door locks (with 1,0s of combinations) even though skeleton keys are more cooler looking.

Lobe the story so far! Please update soon!

Cool chapter :) I liked it a lot :) And Vaati. Never thought I'd see Vaati as a fairy XD Great chapter, amazing content :D

Now if you'll excuse me, I need to go laugh in Vaati's face :points and laughs at Vaati:

Tetra The Adventure Recording Team (One guy) says:

Another wonderfull chapter. I like Darks personallity it's like he stole mine.

Too bad the Zora's are frozen as that cave should be closed due to ice. :( (puts caution sign in front of cave...) scratch that. (puts caution sign before the ice-burgs and the cave. :D

Dark Link: "Thank you for the signs adventure recorder. No problem Dark. I got lots more where that came from.

Good story so far.

"A few orders from me, while standing behind a wall had the undead marching off to fetch ingredients for an inanely complicated soup recipe and me free to enter unnoticed.

I found the elf’s equipment fairly quickly. It was locked in a chest, good locks too. So I simply broke the chest open with a convenient curtain rod leaving the locks in their lovely intact state. I had to admit he had some odd possessions."

(Insert Misson Impossible Theme here) :D Go Dark!

"We managed to make it nearly to the top of one of the towers without incident. As we were running up the stairs, a group of Moblins charged into the hall."

Why the heck are we running UP the stairs? Shouldn't we go down to the first floor and out the gate? I'll just play and plug along.