loved this story its sad though with alice jazz rose and esme being abused soo sad but you are a truly talented writer

A very interesting story and I have enjoyed it very much. I have to say though, it's not the ending I expected. I hope there is a sequel to tie up some loose ends.

Excellent job!

CC

OMG this is an awesome story! I never stopped reading it. I'm sooooooo sad now that I finished it. You have real writing talent. You HAVE to write more!

I love this story.
It's not the happiest story I've read, but I love how there's no drama working up to their relationship, and it just happens.
Even though what I'm about to say contradicts the entire story of Twilight. I prefer All Human stories to ones with vampires, especially BellaxJasper ones :)

Keep up the amazing work, you rock x

ok, you REALLY had me going there for a second with the suicide thing. NOT COOL!

regardless of you scaring me half to death, i still loved the story :)

Don't worry Jasper I love you!

But really this was a great story. Cant wait for a sequel!

please tell me there is a sequel!

ohhhh I love this story _

Aaawwww, this is really cute, loved the ending.

aww i loved it

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i 3 this story :)

AAAWWW! That was such a beautiful story! I cried sooo much- and if a story makes me cry then that is a very, very good thing! I absolutely looooooved it!

yes yes yes yes that was the best chapter yet you had me on my toes and on the edge of my seat and it was a little confusing but great and i truely love this song and i shal want more from you i hope you will come out to be a novlest ill be the frist one to get it happy days for you :)

-the power of darkness

noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo he better not jump :)

-the power of darkness

great chapter but short and what is the diese exsacly :)

-the power of darkness