Great job! Just a heads up: Although he is talking to Christine-and you are correct in thinking his French possessive should be feminine-the French use the masculine form of the possessive whenever the object starts with a vowel. "Ma amour" should be "Mon amour." For future reference. Keep on writing! :)

Nice work.

You rarely find stories where Erik and Christine are that carefree and ... well, normal. ;-)

I've just one tiny little remark:

Although Christine is a woman you have to say 'mon amour'.

In french they don't like it if one word ends with a vocal and the next starts with one.

Just like in 'a apple'.

Cause you can't pronounce it nicely, you just make the feminine 'amour' masculine.

Annoying but true. xD

Besides, keep going, you're always full of ideas and surprises. :-)

Nero

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These were wonderful; funny, sweet, and sexy at the same time.

This was the best of the three and not just because of the s-e-x. I think everyone has had a night like this and you made a middle aged woman happy with her memories. You have the ability to tell a tale that is totally believeable. I am not a writter, but I am so very glad that there are writters such as you. Thank you JPL

Another great one. I was wondering how long they would stay afloat. You know, if you can't laugh with your lover than it is time to find a new one. You made them human and I thank you JPL

That was great. I was really into this. Surprise! Very original and I thank you JPL

Ahah! very amusing. glad you posted it

good job