Lovely story here. Would have made a good Dinosaurs episode, for sure!

This is suppose to be a story classic like this story goodnight rock goodnight stone goodnight mud goodnight stick goodnight twig goodnight another rock goodnight tree goodnight cave men goodnight cave women goodnight cavilings good night tree goodnight sand goodnight yet another rock and goodnight book that is what you call a critic story.

Oh my word! Brilliant! You captured their personalities perfectly! This will definatly be added to my favourites. :)

Aww, I loved it! So cute :D x

Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! Dude! You totally brought back memories! Thank you. I'm the baby! Gotta love me! Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.

Oh man, that was hilarious; thanks for writing it! Loved the bit about Elmo, lol! And the cartoon company with the singing rat? Was that meant to be anything specific? Great work as usual!

lol that was sheer genius! Brilliant!

This was great. I loved the humor in it and could so picture this happening on the tv show.

Love the Elmo bit. Subtle humor at its best!

That was great! Very Jim Henson.

Was uncle Elmo a reference to the man who does the voice for both Baby and Elmo?

Wow. What a moral. Just as demented as the show. (that's a complement) The dialogue is perfect and so is your characterization.