Reviews for Konoha Exiles II: Time Warp
KidneyZero chapter 20 . 9/14
Enjoyed both one and two.
experimenter19 chapter 20 . 12/20/2019
I can’t blame you for ending it like this after all rewriting cannon can get really repetitive at time like I’m doing for a fairy tail fic and will have to do with my anbu naruto fic
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2018
It's actually Hiruzen sarutobi.. calling someone "ninja" that's a leader of the ninja is kinda redundant. It's fanfiction ONLY that he's called "sasuke sarutobi".. And only very OLD stories. (almost everyone knows his name, who naruto is, where he's from, in fact the entirety of the history of the village).

SONS? Ok, self-insert, I'm done with this one.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2018
I always thought it bizzare, if naruto WOULD kill sasuke, and reveal why it happened... Then "the ones that made it happen" were dead, (the uchiha by itachi's own hand), the ones that were responsible for sasuke's "fall", (I think it was already gonna happen), are DEAD by naruto's hand.. SO really?.. What is there a reason for itachi for living?... There is NOTHING TO AVENGE or get even for or anything with his brother dead for acting like he will... There is NO honor, no nothing, he failed all that.. this would be more "tying up loose ends"...

I think it would be more fitting to see people like the council, itachi, sasuke and maybe even obieto committing SUICIDE... It seems more in line.
QueenDeadPool chapter 20 . 9/25/2018
Kind of sad with the rush ended but thank you for finishing it.
Drew chapter 13 . 7/9/2018
Ninja kick the damn cat reminded me of the scene from the original tmnt movie. Ninja kick the damn rabbit.
jenuzumaki chapter 20 . 2/10/2018
I can’t believe Mica married Temari. I was really expecting him to end up with Sakura. He loved her for sure since they were kids. I think Tsunade ruined that, she should have encouraged Sakura not scold her. With a little push, Sakura would definitely fight for him.

Happy with Naruto and Hinata though, they were made for each other.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/24/2017
Really let's have villagers attack kids so glad that you don't write anymore as everyone of your stories are shit
lisa.francis.96780 chapter 20 . 8/14/2016
thanks for giving a summery of what was to happen instead of leaving it incomplete. thanks for sharing your stories.
jackalope33 chapter 1 . 7/17/2016
just wondering... why is it sasuke sarutobi? its hiruzen sarutobi
ivanganev1992 chapter 20 . 6/23/2016
Ch 20

Tsunade in Konoha and Kushina alive made everything basically to shine.

I would like to see detailed carnage of the bandits and the mighty Gato in the traps and war machines of death but that will do.

You created few very good stories.

Maybe now between raising from the Joker and the revealing of the sith lord secrets I'll see your stories and the favorite are way too much to be seen all now but maybe later I'll see your favorites.

I have hundreds more plus other things so I don't know what will be next. Depends of the desired taste in different moments of the stories.

But this time Naruto lived happy life.
ivanganev1992 chapter 18 . 6/23/2016
Ch 18

Better paranoid over preparing for wor in supplies especially for those cases. Nothing is known beneath the surface. Expect the worst celebrate in the best. Blow steam in the middle. Big guns for challenge.
ivanganev1992 chapter 17 . 6/23/2016
Ch 17

Understanding the foxes not so bad. Basically they are from the wild hound family. About cousin of the wolfs .

And did the twins know?
ivanganev1992 chapter 7 . 6/23/2016
Ch 7

If some other clans and civilians are included in the police and the Uchiha as the highest rank in the police that massacre would be avoided. And Sasuke may be ticking bomb. With that arrogance and demanding. Like rotten trash.
satomika chapter 20 . 6/4/2016
Nice and cute!

But I prefer the action, drama, mystery, and romance during the first Exile series...
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