As a rule I am a true blue B/A shipper, but this scenario works very well.

I love the small details and how erotic they become in this story. There is so much passion between Sylvie and Bobby that it just burns off the page (or screen, depending on where you're reading it!). Bravo, please write more.

This is great. I like the way you portray them on here. As long as you don't go marrying them off. This is good,a good clean relationship. I like it this way. He needs a relationship that is without loads of angst and strings. This is as good as it started with Lucy.

Oh my word...this? Gorgeous, absolutely friggin gorgeous. Each scene was jus so...so...GUH! palpable. i hate to sound like a broken record, but as w/ all your writings, this one will stay w/ me for days & days...Peace

i AM REALLY ENJOYING THIS STORY. PLEASE KEEP WRITING.

wow, that was awesome! i am always so sad when your stories come to an end. i want more! your writing is so rich with emotion. i love your characters and their relationships with bobby, their ability to read him and let us into his painful world - and sometimes his world of simple pleasures, when he is able to get to that place. heck, i would love to read about their trip to savannah! i have a feeling that it's going to be a precious trip for both of them.

I didn't think I could love another OC as much as I loved Lucy, but Sylvie has real potential. I' love how you've built in so many potential layers into her without defining them, so we are falling in love with the character but still have so much to learn about her.

And the scene with the prime numbers. Genius. I know I sound like a broken record, but you write Bobby so well. Of course that mind of his would be noticing and playing with patterns all over the place, even when they're unimportant. It's not something he learned, it's part of who he is.

You have the writer's equivalent of perfect pitch.

I think Bobby would like Savannah very much. I can't decide which part he'd like best though. Probably the Telfair, but maybe Forsythe Park. This was a wonderful chapter. :)

You already know this, but this just gets better with each scene. It is just so wonderfully written that the reader just is drawn in immediately and gets involved with what is going on between these two characters. Loved the 'prime numbers' scene. Will we get to see Sylvie show Bobby Savannah? I sincerely hope so!

What a great story. I didn't want to read it too fast because I wanted to be able to savor it.

I like that they don't know everything about one another. I still love that she has a past and secrets (don't we all). I love that he's half distracted by her when they're apart and by work when they're together. Honestly this might be the best thing you've posted here IMHO. Am going to go reread everything else you've written again - cause I'm obsessed with LOCI and housework is boring. Great story. - Dix.

once again i am blown away by the depth of your writing. sylvie is as complex a character as bobby, which is hard to do in his crazy mixed up world and even harder for a shipper to admit that bobby could have an equal who is not eames. the prime number passage in particular is pure bobby - incredibly sharp, wonderfully sensual, but tinged with a slight undercurrent of sadness.

brava.

Awesome, I hope you cont. the Bobby/Sylvie series. I like this couple!

I love it! I love Sylvie. She's a great match for Bobby. More, please?

*Finally* i can leave you a review!

I adored this. It's so gorgeously written, i could feel myself being drawn deeper into this with every scene. I could see this all unfold in my head. I love how you write, how you have written this. I'm also very curious about Sylvie. You have used such beautiful descriptives all the way through which just adds flavour to every line.

I await your next update! :)