Woohoo! That was good. Kinda wish it were longer though, I want to read more about this master vamp. How come Yahiko was able to reach Tokio but Sano never made it?

Thank goodness, they have a bond again!

Uh oh. Shape shifters? Misao's kind?

Good research, Megumi. Will the reasons for their childbearing issues be discovered in Aoshi and Misao's story?

Just wondering, why isn't Sano hunting with the other three? I liked Kenshin and Kaoru's convo btw. Good to know Kenshin was furious too! I hope Kenji and Saitou's interaction and relationship will improve now that the older male's emotions have returned.

Sorry, I just scanned quickly through this, not wanting the details. I find it pretty weird. I think it's because I dislike Saitou and how he treats Kenji. I feel as if it's so unfair that Tokio is torn between loyalties.

Poor girl. I feel for her.

I don't understand why Saitou's so nasty to the twins. If he's so concerned about their attitude toward danger why doesn't he take it up with their parents or even the Prince? If I were in the twins' shoes I'd hate him too.

I'm not familiar with the books you're basing the stories off so sorry if this detail's from there. I feel like it would make more sense for the Carpathians to hold a coming of age ball for their girls once every year or every decade instead of having one every time a female turns 18. This way the single males would make it a point to make sure and attend each ball and improve the chances of meeting their lifemate.

I think Saitou's too hard on Sanosuke. The younger Carpathian was only saying the truth. I like the debut scene. I'm glad his daughter accepted him readily.

Hi! Now I know about Saitou's daughter! Lol, I've read your entire series now x). It's very good, though I will always like reading K/K the most.

that story was lovely and Saito was spot on! I like how you explored the world of carpaithens in such detail asking the questions that need to be asked (not to mention you didn't have to have the main couple have sex wich impressed me unresoved sexuall tention FTW). I rate this story a 10 out of 10

Okay. A female vampire? Wait a minute. How does a person transform into a female vampire. Once again, is it the same as a Carpathian? Glad to see that everything was resolved though. I’ve already started Endure My Love. Like I said earlier on, I read it first before reading the others. It already has the makings of an amazing story. I know I’m gonna love it. I do hope you finish it. It’s gonna be a classic. You have this poll of characters you want your readers to choose so that you can slot them into the next set of series you are about to start. But in that list, you didn’t write Schneider and Misanagi. Schneider was the German, who was part of the Black Knights, who were looking for the Elixir, and Misanagi was the leader of the Sanada Ninjas. Can you remember them, cos to me, they make a good couple? Hope you can add them to your lists.

At last. Kenji and Tokio were able to get a bond, even if it was little. It would have been weird if the twins had no connection. I can’t believe that the evil thing actually took a baby. I hope the baby is safe.

Glad to see that Saitou and Tokio finally worked things out, and they do seem to be talking. Which of course is quite important. At least, her jealousy is gone. What on earth happened to her shop, and contaminated it? Probably what everybody is searching for.

Wait a minute. Kenji was the one who caused the rip? He must be feeling pretty devastated. Poor guy. Glad to see though that Megumi is getting to the root of the problem of the Carpathians. I just love the way she has settled so quickly among them. Question is how come you’ve not mentioned other Carpathians who live in Japan. Apart from Hiko, Kenshin, Sano, Kaoru, Tomoe, Megumi, Saitou, Aoshi, and the twins, with Itsuko. Or, are those the only Carpathians in Japan?

Huh. Carrying her on the wind is so romantic. Reminds me of Aladdin, Jasmine and the magic carpet. To fly must be amazing. A rip in her souls? What on earth caused it? When she was first in pain, I thought it was the pain Megumi, and Kaoru previously were in. Then I remembered that she cannot be going through the pain of transformation, since she is already Carpathians.

Weird. You have made Aoshi talk, as in really talk in this chapter. I know he has talked before. But he hasn’t talked that much, and neither has he gone so personal in his discussion. Are you indirectly trying to say that he has a closer relationship with Saitou than the others? Well, it is a great chapter. I love it. Time for Saitou, Tokio drama. Can’t wait.

Yup. Kenji deserves a whip to his backside. So much passion. That official night between Tokio and Saitou will definitely have a lot of electricity. Seems like Kenshin’s talk with his children will yield some positive results. I sincerely hope it does.