Haha, that was funny, it made me laugh at the end. Although I did wonder about the expressions of the observing parties throughout that ending scene. :)

I would definitely read a continuation of this.

I KNEW it was Pulp Fiction.

that was adorable! and I thought Hayner was the lead! Oh well Seifer is still awesome!

OMG pulp fiction was /Awesome/ and hilarious! and you did a good job copying that. you should make this into a chapter fic. it's be awesome!

lawl, Hayner made bets with the Turks over if Seifer was gay? that's awesome. priceless even. I was laughing so hard. XD

~Evelynn

Seifer makes one awesome gangster. :D I seriously love the way you write him. It's so funny and...so Seifer. xD And I like the incorporation of Final Fantasy VII. It was my favorite Final Fantasy. Great job, you rock.

My new goal: I'm reading all of your Seiners, lol.

Man... You're like the god of writing Seiner, I swear.

So, yeah. I went and got some Lucky Charms and am now continuing to read all your seiner stories... it's now going on 6:30 and I should probably be sleeping but I'm reading all your fics instead because Seifer and Hayner getting it on is just plain HAWT.

Even though I could read this stuff at work tomorrow... (My job is REALLY slack.)

And man... when you said that you got the whole Seifer coming in and glaring at the random jerkface from something your dad did I was like "Whoa... so ... does her dad act like Seifer? ... I really want to know her dad now." And then I got all weirded and creeped out cause I just thought that about someones dad and was like "Nah, he's probably nothing like that and just does random awesome stuff."

Thank you for clarifying it and saying that he's nothing like Seifer so I can kind of just forget that that ever happened ...

Sorry if that was weird for you to hear... It was weird for me to realize I thought it. -_-;

But yeah. In other news: Sorry to be reviewing your other stories in a review for this one. xD

I loved the ending of this one, btw. Seifer is such a sexy jerk. Gawd, I love him.

OH! And this is really weird for me... cause you know how I said I was going to go and check out your other work? Turns out I've already read one of your Seiner fics and favourited it cause it was AWESOME. Huddle Hog I think is one of my alltime fav Seiner oneshots xD Just cause it's so cute.

I also went on your deviantart account and noticed that you've drawn pictures... that I've been like "O, pretty. ::saves::"

So, yah. I've been your unknowing fan for a while now.

Surprise? xD

Sorry. I'm really hyper... must be the sugary goodness of my breakfast cereal.

I'm off to read more!

- Axel's Roxas

it would be interisting to see this story continue

LOVE IT. Honestly, this was beautiful. I'd love to read more of this, but it's only a oneshot... ;_; Anyway, this stayed in my mind for a long time after reading it (I read it sometime last month but only reviewed it now because I had time) and that's a sure sign that it was something special (i read a LOT of FFs). I love your writing style and you have a lot of talent!

Tip though: Be confident in your writing. Saying the characters were OOC is like lacking confidence in yourself to keep them IC. Be confident in how/what you write and present characters how you see them (or want to see them, in some cases). They were IC for your story-after all, they have completely different pasts now, how could they possibly be the same as in their original plot? It just wouldn't make sense to make them exactly the same in a different universe.

I think that you did a fine job of characterization; the characters came across by their reactions and actions without you actually having to go into too much detail about it. Loved the story, keep up the good work!

XD This one made me laugh so much! They're not that OOC; I can actually see Seifer acting like that; and Hayner too. It's really good! *Still laughing* XD that was so funny! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Love x 100,0,0,0,0,0,0 to the infinity.

Haha. Because Seifer is gay. XD

laughs so hard she cant reveiw...

Anyway...i just live that line when he says he's gay, it's...so funny. good work!

This was a really cute idea. I personally think it would be worth continuing if you so chose. Great job, as always. Keep it up.

That was adorable. _

I thought it was a very nice characterization. They're not huge characters, so you can do a lot on your own.

Plus, I loved Pulp Fiction, and this managed to avoid the whole 'holy crap he's going to stab her with a needle' thing.

It was nice, If you want to continue, I'd love to see if this goes anywhere.

Saying everyone is like OOC except Reno is like saying your story is cracked up... Reno is never OOC. I swear, you could probably write him doing ALMOST anything and get away with it being IC... except a few things I've seen. That is, unfortunatly or fortunatly, all I have to say-hands over a soul consuming muffin-Keep it up!