Reviews for The scull |
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Guest chapter 2 . 4/8/2016 MORE |
DepthsOfNothing chapter 2 . 4/20/2009 It's good but do quotations for when they speak and a new space for when they think KAY! just constuctive critisism i did the same thing for my first story |
Thisaccountisclosedhurrr chapter 1 . 3/26/2009 .. / WAY bad grammar. And you couldn't spell skull. Which is a big thumbs down. WAY big thumbs down. Try again. / |
Account is now Inactive chapter 2 . 10/19/2008 Okay, this is the story you wanted me to review right? I hope so! lol. I think that you defintely have a good idea going here. The only things is that your writing seems a little rushed. Maybe you could add a little more detail and make everything a little less bunched together. That's just me. Still, I like the idea and you have a great opportunity to make this very original. Unlike my stories. lmao. ) |
Kayla The Strange chapter 1 . 10/18/2008 Very good but you shouldnt type in Chat speak. Most people dont read stories like that. But, i think its very good. Good luck _ |
Sam7418 chapter 2 . 10/11/2008 Stupid Harold. I hate him. Please update. |
edwardandbella4evah chapter 2 . 10/7/2008 this is really good bt it has a LOT of run on sentences (LOL i just reviewed those today!) you need to work on using commas otherwise great story! |
GothicChevy chapter 2 . 10/5/2008 1. please add more detail. (like 4-5 pages in microsoft word for a good length chapter) 2. it's "Skull" not "Scull" 3. punctuation. other than that, it looks promising. I'd like to see what you do with it! _ Just wish it was easier to read. |