Eh. Arnold just seems passive about it all. Oh you wanna date? OK cool.
Oh you're in love with me? Alright. I think you're cool.
You wanna fuck? Sounds cool but not for my girlfriend. I'll pass.
You say my girlfriend is an orgy having slut? Likes to send nudes? Nah, I think I would've been joined in if that was the case. Cool story though.
I mean through out the whole thing Arnold just seems kinda there lol. You kept saying his only emotional response was calm and cool. So he's just got a neutral face the whole time to me. Uncaring somewhat indifferent...aloof.

AMAZING JOB I LOVE IT! THIS STORY IS AWESOME

Interesting story, with 2 villans forming a love triangle to get a hero.

Keep up the great writing!

Acosta Perez Jose Ramiro has proved in his story that Angelica Pickles and Helga Pataki's interaction can make a great story. I am afraid you gave an anti-example: in your story you left nothing of Helga and Angelica's amazing personalities.

Cool one shot. I did a Rugrats/Hey Arnold crossover as well, 'When Blondes Collide'; if you can, please take a look and tell me what you think.

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Keep the good writing.