you bastard! update!

ranma, I get the feeling things are going to end badly for you

thank you for not wasting time rewriting things that had happened allready in the original, and I look foreward to seeing what you come up with

uh, did you really just compare a school event with his legendary, mountain breaking battle against a pheonix god? this really shouldn't have been a contest.

I know that this will blow up so much ranma will be no more than a charred husk, after all, murphey'r rule, right?

I would review more if I thought you would see it at this point (only took me 7 chapters to realise)

if ranma knows it, why not teach akane himself?

wow, this is just... wow. Does this mean kodachi won't bother ranma anymore? and its even WORSE than furinkan, there the bystanders leave you alone. my only complaint is that harima and hanai wouldn't last 5 seconds against ranma.

option 1, thank all that s unholy, and I want to see if you could pull off a ranma harem with kagome, Yakumo, and airy just because ;D

heh, a good chapter, but how is the assassin going to tie in? are you keeping original pairing or changing them? I can't tell at this point. also, I dont think he's as delusional as kuno, but what happened to furinkan? why do they have to leave? and If they're leaving, what about akane?

ok, so Ranma is essentially trying to make her as op as possible by learning the techniques of both him and ryoga, at that point, why dont he and ryoga start swapping techniques? "hey ryoga, you teach my baksai tenketsu and I'll teach you the (insert technique here)" "deal!"

oh, poor ranma. anyway, I see your going with standard pairings. I have to ask though, why is he sticking with akane here if he so clearly shouldnt? you see it right? anyway, last thing here is that your lack of spoinlers makes this slightly annoying, as I have no idea what it could be that ranma knows that would set kagome off

1 ok, a great premise with an interesting start
2 the way you explained all the characters was creative, but it got confusing with all the back and forth between hypothetical and reality
3 ok, so ranma got some relationship advice, will there be new pairings, or just interactions?
4 I allways thought he should have wound up with Ukyo, SCREW YOU TAKAHASHI!1

This is very funny.

Good story so far.