Awesome story! It's a very interesting new take on love hina and it's very enjoyable to read as well! Keep up the great work and please update soon!

awsome

good story, please update. :)

lol

When is the next chapter of this finally going to come out? You haven't updated in over 4 months.

You tell that swordswoman wannabe, Keitaro, you tell her good!

I really hope that Keitaro kicks that bitch's ass!

you have to update and soon or ill find you

GREAT CHAPTER. IM WAITING TO SEE HOW MOTOKO FARE AGAINST THE ASURA, BUT OVER ALL I WANT TO SEE WHAN TSURUKO COME OF VISIT.

i like how this is going. keep it up

Gotta say im really loving how this story is progressing and in paticualr Keitaro's personality and attitude, hope to see more soon _

"And then, A huge Motorcycle, a Harley in fact, jumped from the long flight of stairs, Naruto didn’t know how it got there, but the skid that the said vehicle made on the ground was perfect, the person was a damn good driver."

Surprise cameo? I don't 'believe it.' ;p

not a bad fanfic you have here. i like the different elements of keitaro's past especially. i always wondered what would happen if kei's beginnings werent so...humble, for lack of better terms, and this seems to be a really good answer to my curiousity. keep up the good work and update again soon!

Chocolate Chip please.

Good chapter.

I like the way Motoko is acting towards Kei.

The scene with Shinobu's dad was well written and carried out as well.

I look forward to more.

Now, about that cookie...

Man stoping at most intresting part ;_;

I hope Tsuruko will be to watch :D

Great story none the less i will be waitng for next chapter!

are u goin to update this?oh and just for heads up i like kei mot pairing they more suited