This story is awesome. You deserve more reviews than you have. Great job, I actually found this in a community where there's only 'good stories'. I recognized your name, and here I am! :D *~jb~*

Quote of the day: "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."

hey wow that was amazing. i was like crying by the end lol

well done xx

That was a great story! Keep up the good work:)

that was soo good. i almost cried. WELL DONE!

:) You know, I don't read a lot of fluff these days (mostly because it's all unrealistic and terrible), but I really liked this oneshot.

The only thing I didn't like was the break-up scene. It was mostly dialogue, and their words didn't seem genuine when I read them. Something like:

“I’m sorry Mitch,” Shane said, barely above a whisper as he looked up at me with tormented brown eyes.

(: You have real promise as a writer!

xoKatie.

can you make it a 2 shot or maybe even a story it kinda left me hanging and i cried and well yeah it's amazingly good

Aww brilliant! Nice ending...

-Giggles.x

I am in love with 'sorry'. It makes me cry every single time.

Great story!