Reviews for What If?
AliceCullen0629 chapter 13 . 1/12
this is a good story i wish that you would keep on going
Reese1603 chapter 12 . 9/26/2009
ok seriously, don't tell me you are going toleave us hanging! I noticed you haven't published in almost a year... please come back and finish!
rmw8855 chapter 12 . 9/1/2009
I really like this story so far. I hope your tests went well :) Hopefully you will get back to this story sometime soon.
VampzRsexy chapter 12 . 6/14/2009
cool story what if bella forgives edward in the next chapter right during the danil clan comes to visit since she would be jelouse just a suggestion
skyblueclouds chapter 12 . 6/10/2009
ok firstly i luv luv luv your story! secondly, have you ever read wuthering heights? cause it's a great book, but i wouldnt call it lovely or there love entirely worth it in beautiful, in fact its somewhat twisted although i suppose in a way it is also sweet yet not really but thats just my opinion so i guess if u really have read it and you think that than cool but i was just wondering cause i'm thinking u probably just remember it being mentioned in twilight and came up with a description for it, and thirdly i dont have a thirdly but i felt like going firstly secondly and thirdly because thats how your authors note went and i dont mean offense by somewhat mocking your A/N i just wanted to copy the style in which you wrote it cause i can! lol long rambly review... shoot i shouldnt have left a nice review cause today is opposite day and u said to leave a nice review but o well! lol k done now bye!:)
BriseisRose chapter 12 . 4/26/2009
This is such a good story! But I see you haven't updated since October. :( If you don't plan on continueing with the story could you please tell me because I woud like to take it off my alert list if you don't plan on writing anymore. I really hope you do though! X
DarkDefender89 chapter 12 . 1/12/2009
LOVE IT UPDATE ASAP!
KaylaCandy16 chapter 12 . 12/14/2008
ah-mazing! Update soon!
ZeilaZ chapter 12 . 11/24/2008
This is a good story PLEASE keep writing
Lumiaire chapter 12 . 11/19/2008
I LOVE IT!
Twerd4eva chapter 12 . 11/11/2008
Please please please ! Write on ! There has been no updates in forever! still waiting!
Eveabella chapter 12 . 10/30/2008
Aw, I love this story! It's so sweet! Can't wait for the next update )
Rossie chapter 4 . 10/28/2008
ohk one rele RELE irritating mistake . . .

its rung, not ringed!

aha seriously I cracked up.

ohk, other then that one mistake, rele good I like this:)
blubuttrfly10 chapter 12 . 10/28/2008
I'm so happy that Bella is starting to feel that she loves Edward. I wonder if she try to figure out who Edward has feelings for cause I'm pretty sure she won't just ask him herself. Can't wait for more!
Jen.Lawrence.23 chapter 12 . 10/28/2008
wow.. that was amazing! Really great work! You made my heart race! So sad that twilight ended so soon but that's what fanfics are for! Really great work! U made my day..
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