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AliceCullen0629 chapter 13 . 1/12 this is a good story i wish that you would keep on going |
Reese1603 chapter 12 . 9/26/2009 ok seriously, don't tell me you are going toleave us hanging! I noticed you haven't published in almost a year... please come back and finish! |
rmw8855 chapter 12 . 9/1/2009 I really like this story so far. I hope your tests went well :) Hopefully you will get back to this story sometime soon. |
VampzRsexy chapter 12 . 6/14/2009 cool story what if bella forgives edward in the next chapter right during the danil clan comes to visit since she would be jelouse just a suggestion |
skyblueclouds chapter 12 . 6/10/2009 ok firstly i luv luv luv your story! secondly, have you ever read wuthering heights? cause it's a great book, but i wouldnt call it lovely or there love entirely worth it in beautiful, in fact its somewhat twisted although i suppose in a way it is also sweet yet not really but thats just my opinion so i guess if u really have read it and you think that than cool but i was just wondering cause i'm thinking u probably just remember it being mentioned in twilight and came up with a description for it, and thirdly i dont have a thirdly but i felt like going firstly secondly and thirdly because thats how your authors note went and i dont mean offense by somewhat mocking your A/N i just wanted to copy the style in which you wrote it cause i can! lol long rambly review... shoot i shouldnt have left a nice review cause today is opposite day and u said to leave a nice review but o well! lol k done now bye!:) |
BriseisRose chapter 12 . 4/26/2009 This is such a good story! But I see you haven't updated since October. :( If you don't plan on continueing with the story could you please tell me because I woud like to take it off my alert list if you don't plan on writing anymore. I really hope you do though! X |
DarkDefender89 chapter 12 . 1/12/2009 LOVE IT UPDATE ASAP! |
KaylaCandy16 chapter 12 . 12/14/2008 ah-mazing! Update soon! |
ZeilaZ chapter 12 . 11/24/2008 This is a good story PLEASE keep writing |
Lumiaire chapter 12 . 11/19/2008 I LOVE IT! |
Twerd4eva chapter 12 . 11/11/2008 Please please please ! Write on ! There has been no updates in forever! still waiting! |
Eveabella chapter 12 . 10/30/2008 Aw, I love this story! It's so sweet! Can't wait for the next update ) |
Rossie chapter 4 . 10/28/2008 ohk one rele RELE irritating mistake . . . its rung, not ringed! aha seriously I cracked up. ohk, other then that one mistake, rele good I like this:) |
blubuttrfly10 chapter 12 . 10/28/2008 I'm so happy that Bella is starting to feel that she loves Edward. I wonder if she try to figure out who Edward has feelings for cause I'm pretty sure she won't just ask him herself. Can't wait for more! |
Jen.Lawrence.23 chapter 12 . 10/28/2008 wow.. that was amazing! Really great work! You made my heart race! So sad that twilight ended so soon but that's what fanfics are for! Really great work! U made my day.. |