Reviews for The Falling
ncsupnatfan chapter 1 . 8/7/2019
like your stories learned of them from a reader of mine NC
Lady Ramona chapter 30 . 7/27/2019
I've waited until I read all of them, I must say dam good story, thanks for finishing it!
Nina Ferraro chapter 30 . 7/5/2019
Omg I love the end! Ripper is staying with Bobby!? That’s adorable! Maybe one day they’ll need Lucifer I wonder if he would come out if dean was in serious trouble!? I love these stories and I happy to finally get to know the end!
Heartless BytchhakaHelenBach1 chapter 29 . 4/20/2019
I just wanted you to know I've immensely enjoyed both stories in this 'verse so much. But when I read where Dean was asked if he found peace and his reply was he had purpose just totally blew me away. Total 'whoa' minute. I had to sit back and just let it wash over me like a frikken tidal wave. Thank you so much for your excellent storytelling. Never stop.
vrskaandrea chapter 30 . 3/29/2019
Have to say, that was amazing. Deep down, I felt Dean and Lucifer would become one, intertwine again, but the things that had to happen in order to get there... Brilliant work on this one. And the best thing, not one instance was left opened, not one issue unresolved. I could picture every scene as clear as it was in the show itself, every expression the boys made... And Bobby, really good job on him. I read a few stories with him in it, and beside his regular phrases, no one seem to portray him as well as you did.
I just could drop this story, much like its prequel, only I liked this one just a bit better.
Great job. Really!
Shazza19 chapter 30 . 3/12/2019
Hi just finished reading this story and I really glad that you did not give up on it. I hope that you will write more in the future. Thank you again love your work
Arw165 chapter 30 . 1/3/2019
I guess I'm a pessimist, since I never considered any peaceful resolution between Dean and Lucy, I thought Lucifer would be destroyed or permanently sealed somehow etc. You surprised me. Thanks for finishing the story, I hope you are satisfied with your work. And hopefully you will write new Dean-stories for us. :)
friend chapter 20 . 12/31/2018
thnx dear rae, I'm so happy you finished this and I like to read more new stories on supernatural from you, looking forward to it... wish you the best
DellaVie chapter 30 . 11/18/2018
*exhales loudly and sits back in chair, content*

Thank you so much for finishing this story. All the kudos in the world go to you, for not only closing this book, but doing it well. I present you with this internet as a token of my appreciation.

*hands over internet, bows and backshuffles away*
alena chapter 30 . 11/18/2018
So good to see that this is complete and you have rounded it off well. Thank you!
Heartless BytchhakaHelenBach1 chapter 25 . 10/29/2018
I found purpose. OMG! If you never write another word in your life, you've still written one of the greatest lines I've ever read. I heard that in Dean's voice clear as a bell while reading it. Thank you for making this happen.
IncompetentPigeon chapter 29 . 10/27/2018
I was just scrolling across the supernatural fanfiction page and bam! You updated! I'm so happy! This was an amazing chapter and oh my god it's coming to a close so fast! This story has been something I've looked forward to for weeks and months. Thank you so much for the descriptive and inspiring story. I'm so happy you continued this story, it brought out so much anticipation, excitement, and emotions within me. Your ideas are so unique, original! The way that you present these characters as well as their motivations, their pain, their bonds. I don't have many words to express just how grateful I am that you write. Your imagination is an endless stream of universes and events.

I love how you paralleled Dean and Lucifer through trying to appease an absent father, through becoming a soldier for him, and connecting their speech at certain times in the chapter. I really love how they would speak at the same time because at the core they are the same person. In the show, Dean was compared to Michael, becoming the dutiful son as well as the responsible older brother. However, your story juxtaposes how God cast Lucifer to Hell (yet still supposes he follows demands) to how John abandons Dean and expects him to obey his rules. (Or that was the feeling I got! I really love your interpretation of the fall as well as Lucifer's role following his descent from heaven.)

I really feel for Lucifer. He gets abandoned, cut off from most of his family, yet still has to adhere to the demands of the father who exiled him. I think even if he hates angels that he may respect or at least tolerate Jeremiel for meeting and speaking with him. After all, most of his family has abandoned him to fate. So many years with only his burden of sins, those he committed and those forced upon him. I'd imagine he was probably alone for hundreds of millennia so no wonder he was tired. He wanted to die.

Being human really suited him. Actually, becoming Dean Winchester gave him the development and even a bit of hope he needed to live. I always wanted to see a deeper connection with the celestial counterparts the Winchester brothers were connected to. It felt a bit cheap that they were only used as bodysuits for the angels. That's why I love this. I love your story. You managed not only to develop the character more than the show has allowed throughout the 14 seasons but also gave insight into what being Lucifer really meant. We were able to explore his character, his motives, and the deep inhuman entity that he is.

Thank you so much and see you next chapter!
IncompetentPigeon chapter 28 . 10/24/2018
Wow, this was amazing! I'm so curious how Lucifer met Mary now and if that meeting was the start to becoming Dean? As much as Lucifer wants to keep up his appearance, I believe he sent Sam away to keep him safe. So, it shows that the line isn't completely separate and he may truly care for Sam (even if it is only Dean's feelings carried over).

I thought that when Dean was overwhelmed with being Lucifer and he chose to play cat-and-mouse with Sam that it was Lucifer's messed up way of teasing and poking fun at his younger sibling. He fondly included him in this warped and twisted 'scavenger hunt for Dean'.

I really like the similarities between Lucifer and Dean in this story. For instance, they both have masks. Lucifer hides his hurt and anger through a mask of maniacal madness, and Dean suppresses his self-hatred, burdens, etc. under the broken facade of normality. While Lucifer copes with expressing his rage and suffering through acts of intense violence, Dean lets it build up over time until it explodes, in a cascade of emotion that is sometimes directed at those he loves the most. They both try to live up to the expectations of their father-figures, only to be met with disappointment.
Heartless BytchhakaHelenBach1 chapter 27 . 10/14/2018
Oh man, you've left me twisting in the wind. I want so much more.
Irreality chapter 25 . 10/6/2018
Hi,
I'm a new reader to this story. Unearthed it and Lucifer a few days ago and immediately subscribed.
Thanks so much! It's thrilling, exciting, jam packed with a host of good ideas.
And yikes! Cliffhangers now that I have to wait for updates like everyone else.
Can't wait to read what happens next.
Thanks again!
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