I know it's been a decade, but . . .
I LOVE THIS STORY!
The bromance, the depth and detail of the storyline, the development of the characters (I love that you didn't make John the A-Typical bully and actually gave him a redemption story.) It's all so carefully written.
I do hope you can update soon! Highly anticipating how you finish this out!

Ohhh...please update...!

Hey, will you ever be able to update this story again? It's a lovely story, and it would be such a shame if it were to go dark as it were.

Please update! (Yes, I know I am writing this 8 years later, but still...I can hope, right?)

-:)

Please finish this!

WOW! Just wow. I LOVE sibling bonding fanfics and how close they all are. I will definitely keep looking for your next chapter(s).

I have a weak spot for stories like this and good gods, by the Lion's mane, this is incredible! I do hope that you'd update - my Edmund feelings are craving for more!

Wow! I just found this story and have been sniffling through most of this last chapter. If you ever pick it up again, I'd love to see where you take this.

Great story. You don't think about just how hard it must've been for them...

Lucy is the glue that keeps them together. I hope we get to see her soon.

It was a very good story. I really enjoyed reading it, and I really hope you will continue this story. Though, it has been three years since your last update.

Anyway, I'm sorry if there are any grammar or spelling errors. English isn't my native language.

Please update soon. This is really great.

i just found this and i think it's amazing! you portray everyone so well, and you make me feel as if i'm sitting on that bench next to them. you're an awesome writer and i really hope you update soon!

I love this story :) You've done a really nice job writing it, and I'm stoked to see where you'll take it next. I hope you'll update it again soon :D Thanks again for sharing this on here. It's exactly the sort of story I hoped to read, and you portrayed it wonderfully. Keep up the awesome work!

I love the way you depicted the scenes in this story. I felt myself get lost with Peter and Edmund in the flashbacks, and the way you wrote the ending line closed the chapter wonderfully. I look forward to reading lots more :) Thanks again for sharing!

Really nice work with this chapter. I love how smoothly you tied in the ending thoughts to not only the chapter as a whole, but into the entire story. I also really enjoyed seeing Peter's view of Edmund's kingly aura, and vice-versa. Thanks for a great story :) I look forward to reading more!