I just found this old version and the new one, and I love it. This older version of Magical is a lot of fun and a good story, but the newer Magical is much better written overall; the flow, characters, and story progression. I like the changes you made. Thank you for posting the new one in , as it's easier for me to follow. I look forward to reading the rewrite as you post it.

Lol, I'm the same way. I can't get any inspiration, what-so-ever, unless I am sitting on the world's shakiest bus on the road to and from school :3

More on this website please.

i'm really enjoying this story and am REALLY looking forward to reading more! :D
good luck with everything, and i hope to read more from you soon! :)

Update
Plz leeee

I loved the scene between clockwork and Danny! so many funny zingers! :D

please update yours is one of the best HP/DP stories out there and i really want to read more.

more please.

this chap was great lol

Japanese is hard!(at least for me) I wish there was more.*sign*

UP-DATE!SOON!(SOMEDAY!)

You are so right about the wands and pets(although Ron had a pet Rat).
If Hermione had said the following to me I would have become passive agrassive for about ten minutes.(That might not seem a lot but I can't hold grudges so ten minutes is a lot. ) "Your mum's rather inattentive, isn't she?" Hermione asked "Well, shortsighted, then. I mean, anything could happen to you without her there!" Danny shrugged. "Shortsighted works."
Also the following does seem like something first year Hermione would say. My parents used to leave me and my bro at the movies when I was about 11 or 12 and his a year younger.(This might explain why we are so independent, now that I think about it.)

When Debbie said "If you go berserk, you'll be at that school, and far away from me."
It made me snort!XD
"Thanks for the vote of confidence," Danny drawled, rolling his eyes and looking mildly offended. "If I go nuts, the world as anyone knows it is going to end. I don't particularly want that to happen."
HA!
I love that Danny and his "Mom" and "Dad" are considered Dark creatures.
I loved the following:
After all, anyone who sounds that obnoxious is probably really smart, and nerds can be good to know if you need to look up something obscure. Knowing my luck, I'm going to need to find out all sorts of odd things…so someone who's bound to get on the librarian's good side is a must-have friend.

I adore how 17 year-old Danny thinks! That's a very snaky thought but then again everyone is a bit snaky . XD

I agree with you on Danny sensing magic.

WOW!nice I like your reasoning for Danny seeing auras and I also thought that Danny's ghost sense was separated from his ice powers even after the show showed Danny's ice powers. The block of stu-dome is impressive. nice way to not make Danny to powerful.

i know u have most likly stoped this story but if you could please wright more of it i would be most thankfull as i do realy like this story