Nice story. I especially liked the poem in this chapter. One question: What did they do at the end of this chapter? Did they kiss, hug, or did they do something more? Little vague, there. But it's a good plot, even if the story itself is a little rough around the edges. Can't wait to read more.

Oh, I feel flattered *blush*

Those verses were very beautiful. A question, are you Spanish? Summer firewood are made on the beach in Spain. It would explain a bit (maybe).

Humm, you've left the chapter in an interesting point, I want to read more.

See ya~

I have been reading your story so far and I think it's great!

I like your poem too 0

Ooh, Sephiroth took his jacket off... What will happen now? I can't wait!

My best regards,

~Irith

I'm glad you updated. Is getting steamier. Oh gosh..Seph just have to take off his leather coat and go near Aerith like that...You make me think of so many thing that can happen in the next chapter...

Well don't worry about the updates, myself I'm a bit slow in them.

On with the chapter, flashbacks are a good source if not used too much, thought it was a nice toucht here. Hum, the relation improvement was smooth enought, people tend to rush that a bit, you have my aproval.

And don't look down at yourself like that, you write because you like to write, not to impress other people, that's something that has to come depending on your skills, not because you ask for it.

And please, write some more, I'm really interested in it.

See ya~

You updated! Yeahoo...It seems that I have influenced you isn't it? Hehe.

So his coat is his way of hidding? Lol. But, if he was using his coat that would mean he was shirtless *drool*

Ejem, now seriously. Am I not the only person who noticed how weird Sephiroth moved when Cloud were chasing him comparing when he is showed in the flashback? (Really, he moved like a pupet).

Aeris is so going to have a headache about Cloud and Zack.

I'll be waiting for more.

See ya~

hi...i'm waiting for more!

(also, the battlestar galactica (the new one, not the 1970s one) series' soundtrack is really good with your story.

Oh my... This chapter was... beautiful. It strongly reminds me of another author around here in , Noacat, she writes really well (see Purgatory). Perhaps because it so spiritish? Who knows...

See ya~

O what is set before them now. Hehe please continue as soon as possible. XD

nice, very, very nice. I really loved that last part with the connection between Aeris and Seph with the White Materia

I like how you get more confidence on the later chapters. Don't worry about the writting, you'll get better with the more you write (Besides, there are people who write even worse, so do not worry).

It's quite interesting this story, I like the most how you portrait the characters's mind, it's very beliveable.

I'll wait for the next one.

See ya~

Woopie doo~ Chocobo and Sephy~ Man I wanna draw them together. Hehe. Glad you updated.

Unlike Aeris I got my wish: I got Cloud and the gang.

The Chocobo ploy you devised was brilliant in its simplicity.

And again i like how Sephi made her remember Zack.

hey, we want the next chapter! I liked the reminiscence about Zack and the way Sephi answered her question, and then her lecture about the voices.

When will Cloud and the gang step into the mix?