videl hissing saying to sayianman will you relax calm down chill i know that you worry about me that you care about me that much to lie to our teachers about going to the bathroom everytime i go help the police do their job because the Satan city police force is a joke to risk getting kicked out of school because you was too busy helping me as sayianman what was you thinking listen here son gohan i will be fine don't worry about me worry about that thick sayian head of yours if and when the school ever decides to call chichi and tell her what her son my boyfriend has been doing

Videl to gohan when are you going to proposed to me so I can be mrs videl son

Lessons Learned is a solid theme. This fic was cute, and I enjoyed it. I don't have much else to add; it was par the usual course for you, an excellent fic IMO.

Great job.

I'm sad there wasn't much steamy videl/gohan action. Nice story nonetheless!

Haha, this is so cute! They were so in-character and Goten singing in the end made me laugh out loud.

Brilliant Fic, you could really feel the tension between them up until the moment Goten found them. Great oneshot :)

Amazing work :)

lol

I totally loved it

Aw, that was so sweet. I loved it. Please dont' stop writing. I like your style. This was so funny!

Another awesome fic! But you really should try writing a DBZ -G/V fic that's more than 2 chapters long... :P

aww sweet and funny. I really like it.

Aww this was really sweet and quite funny too. Goten was really cute when he was running away saying he was going to tell on Gohan.

Hey love,

Surprised to hear from me? Sorry that I've been a TOTAL "no-show"...Seriously.

Hehe. This made me giggle. Well done, sweetie. The part where Gohan started shooting chi blasts at Goten was funny

Just one question: DID they kiss? Or were their lips just very close to each other's as they realised when they both looked at each other?

Anyway, honey, I liked this very much.

Tell me when you're settled back into school,'kay? You need to TELL me, girl.

Anyway, love you loads

R

Awesome job!

-D101

This was pretty cute. So this was your 40th fic on this profile? Sweet, time to celebrate! Though the contest is only between you and me right now. Hope more come in.

For being un-beta'd or unedited, I didn't see any mistakes, for whatever that's worth. Laterz.