Lol nice ending

Finally! i realistic one! THANK YOU!

hahahahahaha that was hilarious! i luv stories about james serious and remus! very well done!

~Ann~

This was a good fic. I like the idea of it, it's really great. "The quiet ones." I haven't heard that in relation to Remus before, but I love it. You just need to watch out for some of the punctutation and commas. Also, in one sentence, "Do I need to deperate you two up?" or something like that, the "up" wasn't neccessary. Were you trying for "split you two up"? Anyhow, good job overall, I enjoyed it!

Oh, and if you're interested in other "finding out" fics (just what I call them, they're some of my faves), check out mine, Loony Moony. I was really cruel in that, but hey, if JKR can kill Remus off, I might as well give her another reason to kill Bellatrix. And James. And Sirius. (sob for the last two). OH! And Peter. Yes, definitely Peter. And (sob) Snape. And pretty much everyone else, except Lily. She was nice :) Haha, there I go rambling. Sorry! Great job, though!

Fun story! I liked how Sirius was so... emotional :) lol It's not a side we see often.

vg

Happy? I'm reviewing even though I've read this story how many times before?

Professor Swift oddly reminds me of Phoebe...

So, I have no idea what to say about this considering I've already told that I love it, but of course if I don't review I don't get stories... crap.

Chocolate... I still want brownies, we should make mom buy some soon.

Lily is awesome, don't you think?

Well, I have created a fairly random review and I'm proud of that fact.

Sweets03

Random Note: I just read the bottom of the Review window thingy and it says that 'A well rounded critique is often the mot rewarding tool for a writer' I don't think I have ever read a review like that.

LOVED it! And the ending... Priceless! 'Are you joking? I'm twelve years old!' HAHAHAHAHHAHHA!

-Screams an extremely high pitched shriek-

I love you! You have new oneshot and it's long hehe. I'm just so happy! It just brightened up my b*itch of a week(I'm about to just kill off everyone in my story and then I would have to kill someone in real life). Lets Read!

Ahh sister's, mines 19 we bicker a lot too haha. Man, I read your profile we are extremely alike aren't we? Are you a stalker? Haha jk. I'd love to see your sisters profile what's her SN?

Okay back to the story!

Freakin' Sirius...

Random thought you probably should have put a little line thingy in between 'She knows where to hit us and later that night' seems kinda funny.

Ahh obliviousness, I can relate.

I love that you write Peter as a friend and not completely stupid.

Aww, I like Professor Swift.

"You've bloody lost it." Great line.

Nathan...One Tree Hill...Lucas...Gilmore Girls...got called a Gilmore Girl with my mother yesterday...I need to read that d*amn book ugh...

Fluttered, I can just see that.

I can see Lily being an awesome Note Taker...

Hair lengthening charm, now bald I laughed for that one.

White! Professor White is our(Mine and Molly's which is my other account with my best friend) Muggle Studies Teacher.

You know you would think that medical records would be better protected that haha.

"Poor Remus" didn't like that it was like instead of having a life long condition that makes him an outcast that he had a common cold.

-Laughs- I love he just kept on walking.

"Subtle like, you know" Haha right like you could ever be subtle.

'It was disturbing" Oh geez...

And Remus Lupin has left the room...

I like how you doing it Sirius doesn't know what to say and Remus isn't a complete blubbering idiot.

Sirius he uhh kinda does believe all that...

Chocolate, I want chocolate... I think I can get my sister to go get a chocolate cake from the bakery.

Remy! N can't believe you did that -cries-. Alright I forgive you.

Oh my god, I knew you had to add Lily somewhere!

Well, all-in-all in was a pretty awesome story do some more oneshots I like them...

Caffeineoholic

Credible take on a much written about event. But the best part IMO is this:

The boy walked confidently over to the red-headed Lily Evans. And the Marauders heard him say, “Hey Lily, wanna be my girl?” Their eyes widened along with Lily’s.

“Are you joking? I’m twelve years old!” the fiery girl snapped

I can't believe how many fans start their "couples" off at 12 and even sometimes 11!

This story was great! Are you going to continue and write about the animagi and all that?