Loved this! It’s so refreshing to see Legolas and Gimli having actual personalities, apart from being nice. I loved your portrayal of their friendship.

Ooo, nice one, Aragorn. That was slick.

Legolas! Seriously? Are you trying to get yourself killed?

Legolas and Gimli, the Rovan dols (Elvish for hard heads)!

That was heated. Yes, Legolas. Being off your feet can make you very cranky.

Please, not more Orcs!

Ohh, Legolas...it's a miracle if you last the night!

They need help!

Dang it, Legolas! Why the heck didn't you tell Gimli sooner about what you were really looking at? I thought that was what you were doing.

Oh, man. Not good!

"Gimli, I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship..."

I wish they didn't have to leave them behind!

It's about time! Legolas, I know why you hesitated, but look at yourself now! Boy, Aragorn is NOT happy! But Legolas deserved it.

Legolas, you need to tell Aragorn right now before you drop dead! Maybe you enjoy getting fried by his wrath but not me! Guys, this facade can't go on much longer!

Oh, guys. Aragorn is going to be furious when he learns you didn't tell him! If he knew, he could at least do something to still the infection till they get to Lorien. Great chapter.

Gimli, you and Legolas are both more alike than you think: both hard heads!

Good story, it was fun to read :)

This was a fabulous story. So well written it had it all - adventure, hurt, comfort and friendship. I enjoyed it beginning to end! Can't wait to see what else you have written.

This is such a wonderful story! Chock-full of angst and lovely hurt/comfort. I really enjoyed the scene where Legolas asks Gimli for forgiveness. And the action with the orcs was amazing!

Very nice trick, with the butterflies.

So Legolas was just hurting from the fever. And Gimli is clever enough to listen and understand. They'll become friend.