Ha! Now Rose can move on. She was too obsessed with him.

Thank you for this! Rose WOULD work non-stop to get back, and I love that the Doctor is happy with River and both River and the Doctor are enjoying a day when nobody dies. This was a nice moment.

This is really good :)

W00T! I'm a complete and utter DocRiver fan! THIS STORY ROCKS!

I don't really like DocRose that much...Well, I don't really like Rose that much. But that's only because she had been stranded before I could even understand what the word 'Romance' meant...but still.

ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC JOB!

XOXO Jemima

Oh cool! I really liked this!

I'm a big River fan. Most other Whovians scream and hurl bricks at me when I say it, but I really am! I love River fics - its a side of Who we're probably never going to see, and I think its great that some people are going outside the boundries of TenRose to explore other pairings. Because, lets face it - RiverTen is basically Cannon!

I read some of the reviews, and I really want to hit some people. Well done on such a great fic, and congratyouwelldone on being "Brave" enough to explore anything other than TenRose!

Very Very good. Nicely Done. That is exactly how that scene would go down.

I loved this! Good use of the cannon setting - hopefully Rose will have finally learnt to move on.

There's life after Rose (thank goodness), and its sad that Rose can't see that.

the good part was all the description but i have to say i didnt sort of like it espacially when river song kissed the doctor sort of cant get that image out of my head as you can tell i'am a total drose fan,

Interesting and logical use of the canon threads. Feels just a bit crammed. Nicely done, though.

nice!

clever jackie..

hmm.. i'm married and we married couples do actually *REALLY* kiss.. at least some of us still do!

your writing is good. too bad you can't do more(?)