Reviews for Romantic Yume
Aveena chapter 1 . 8/18/2017
I'm so glad that I took your advice and read "Raikiri no Yume" before reading this one-shot. Beautifully sweet and gentle. Honestly though, I was eating chocolate chip cookies while reading this! Coincidence much? Lastly...GRANDSTANDING FOR GLORY! (it's a ssb4 video) ;) /
Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
totally love it. you are amazing
Animefangirl95 chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Because of tier hardships and jobs, they don't really seem 17 haha more like early to mid 20s haha great "sequel"
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
that was really sweet
Cherry blossom chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
Ahh love this. Now I'm wondering what the he'll happened in the other story? Now I'm off to read Raikiri no Yume!

Ja ne!
ferbfletcherlover chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
great story
Breaking-Reen chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
I just read Raikiri no Yume and this one shot and i must say bravo. Your stories are written beautifully. I love how they were still in character and your creativity made for a great story. I know you wrote these over a year ago but i will still say keep up the good work!
Nerd4eva chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
Wow! Loved it! Awesome job! P
FenixPhoenix chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
Really good. Again, excellent description -enough for us to construct a picture but without tiring us. I also like how you kept them on character, you excelled at that.

My only sort of uncertainty was with the parenthesis. Where those thoughts of Tenten or was it the thoughts of the author?

Well, excellent job.
Mischievious Lil Tink chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
this is probably one of the best stories i've read in months. so cute!
Ryuu no Kami chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
AW! I love it! I am so glad you told me about it! I would be missing out on so much happiness! OH THE YOUTH! Great story! And curse that damn oven! lol

Anyways, loved it very much! I'm gunna have to keep up with all the stuff you write! So expect more reviews from me if you keep writing! Keep it up!

Kratos Wilder
xxbeni.music.soul chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
Aw, beautiful piece for a very beautiful work indeed C:

so in love with this two, right now!

Gchan.
siruisju chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
Amazing as always. I look forward to more.
sophia666 chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
Great writing. What does 'Yume' mean again? I really loved this, even more than Raikiri no Yume, and I loved Neji's POV and his and Tenten's relationship and the kiss! Finally! Great story. Thanks for writing.
Twylyte chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
Very nice; you have a good writing style. Couple of places that seem a bit of syntax but they still fit so, overall: Good Job! I look forward to more 'mini-quels'.
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