Please continue your story! I'm practically dying wanting to know what is going to happen between them!

Well, that was pointful.

There seems to be a little issue with spaces. Is it just my device acting up?

Lol cute w I enjoyed this very much

Darn you, stupid Ken! Old people interrupting just when it's getting good... -pout- Yummy story, by the way :D

Nice story! XD I just love random one shots! XD Keep up the fabulous work!

Joshua is shameless...

Well written.

One of the best Joshua/Neku stories EVER. Ahaha.

Totally cute, and I've never heard "...wound a hand around his head and held him in place" in a story before, and it took a twist for me. I particularly thought it was even CUTER. Haha.

I got a little sad when Ken Doi had told them to go outside. D:

D'aw. o3o

Yeah, i'm pretty sure Neku had a crush on Joshua during some point. 3

"My,my..." She sat back on her couch, staring at her laptop happily.

"Thank you for writing that. It completely brightened my dismal day. Very cute,"

The Indigo Schemer grinned happily, toying with the mousepad and slipping a check mark into the 'Add Story To Favorites' box and grabbed two cookies from the plate near her. She held one to the laptop's screen, giggling.

"I think you deserved this, Kaoru Gal!"

aw cute! Joshua is attracted to neku of course!

Aww... cute. Yay.

I need to add you to author alert now... I didn't find this until like three weeks after you posted it.

Okay... so what did I like the best about this... well, Ken, the ramen guy. He's funny. Neku's refusal to answer the question, even after he just made out with Joshua in a public place; while visible, no less! Joshua being Joshua. Joshua's rare serious moment. Basically... everything.

I think it turned out good.

-Kiki

I don't like being held to suspense...

No spelling mistakes. I can't find gramma. Good so far.

That was very good

Yes, i like the fic very much~

Cuteness

Oh, nonononoNO, darling! Don't be put off; it was wonderful! Really!

I really DO need to play that game *Sheepish grin* I'm just, uh, kinda preoccupied with my work/moving/etc as you well know.

I think..?

In all honesty, I don't understand how Neko and Joshua are different from Sora and Riku. They really, truly aren't, are they?

And see? You -can- write not-quite angst! Now, all you've gotta do is write a JoshuaxNeko piece and switch all the names to Sora and Riku when you're done and BAM! You've got a not-so-angsty Soriku story, hun! XD

Geez, I miss you. Lizzie's here, so I'ma see her tomorrow! Yayness! And I'm trying to convince her to go as Namine. I told her that she could wear an Organization cloak over the dress and she could draw. Yes, I'm trying to entice our "little gentleman" *Giggles*

Ooh! And I was just chatting with her on the phone while drawing XigDem (I KNOW-NOT ZEMYX! But it's for a friend who needs S.E.R.I.O.U.S. cheering up right now) and asked her what I should have DemDem wear.

Joh, darling, she said a DRESS/SKIRT/TUTU. I immediately informed her of my need to tell you that I do believe our yaoi-fangirliness is rubbing off on her~ We're making progress yet!

Oh-and as a last note? I'll seriously write you something in return if you write me some Zemyx. It doesn't even have to be fluff-it could be kinky! I like kinky too, darling. I do believe that was your fault, after all (and I adore you for it). It's just...I NEED good Zemyx *Cries* I ran out of it, like you claim to have run out of Soriku (which WOULDN'T happen if you'd just read consensual, darn it)!

I love you, sweetie!

~Demy, your OTP xoxoxoxoxo