your VERY good at writing angst. I got the feels

What a boring story

I cringed at all the teen “romance”/jealousy stuff here, but somehow at the end I still had tears in my eyes.

I don’t have any clear sense of _why_, but despite my not liking some parts of it this story affected me greatly.

Well, that made me a bit more emotional than I wanted to be.

Lovely and heart wrenching. Thanks

Great story.

The ending was too... sudden. That's the only problem I have. Amazing build up, but the ending was too sudden considering the depth of emotion harry felt. But still... great story! _

I love the way you write angst and hurt,it's the way I dream of making readers read...but the ending should have been Harry yelling at Hermione(in bad words) and killing himself right in front of her...

I think Harry's reaction was out of proportion and he was too harsh on Hermione. So we're her parents. As happy as it makes me to see them make up and become a couple, I don't think one could fully trust someone after being hurt like that even if it was legitimate. Also this story was rather depressing and it has me a little concerned about what motivated you to write it. If you have such troubles in real life you might want to speak to someone about it. I'm no therapist but I'm willing to listen if you need any help

I really enjoy Broomsticks stories and have read most of them more than once.

Really Fudge are you that arrogant to think it'll do any good.
Oh wait. I forgot that's a yes.

Such emotions... I can see why so many people loved this author. I feel I do now as well.

Nicely done, we all make mistakes from time to time, some bigger than others, but fortunately this one was forgivable, even though it took a large amount of work to do so, but then the best things are worth the work. Thank You. TTFN

Over Whelm Ing!
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I cried