Reviews for Mentality's Hold |
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DearDarkling chapter 11 . 7/4/2014 Why has this stopped? I need more damnit! |
Moonlightnight101 chapter 11 . 9/29/2012 Weird but good story |
Katea-Nui chapter 11 . 5/28/2011 Will there ever be more to this? |
creativesm75 chapter 11 . 12/14/2010 nice |
Silver-ShadowSpark chapter 11 . 9/27/2010 Please update soon. I was rather upset when you took the story down. Couldn't you have left up the old one until you were done revamping it, and then just replaced it with the new one? :( I like the way you portray the Starscream/Skywarp/Thundercracker interactions. Spark |
grimlock47 chapter 11 . 2/16/2010 continue? pwez. |
deathberry9000 chapter 11 . 2/12/2010 I...wow, this is awesome..I dont know how to describe it! its so amazing! more plz! |
anonydecepticon chapter 1 . 2/5/2010 Wow great story, hope you continue it soon I'm dying to see how it ends. |
itachi's raven chapter 4 . 1/30/2010 im really into this story any chance of updating soon? |
fluting-through-life chapter 11 . 11/18/2009 Wow. Just. Wow. This story is totally amazing. Like, seriously. I mean, it's kind of twisted because, if I understand correctly, Starscream's creator did some pretty messed up things to him. But still, it's just... totally incredible. The idea is completely original and the execution is flawless. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please. Pretty please? |
recyclablefoxx chapter 11 . 10/3/2009 Holy crap, this fiction makes me speechless. I can't wait for the next chapter :D |
crimsonseastorm chapter 11 . 9/30/2009 WOW! This story had me on the edge of my seat the whole time I was reading (which was awhile as it's rather lengthy). Your characterizations are wonderful and there are definite twists going on here. Like why Starscream and Skywarp are so close that was a what-NO-WAY! moment for me. Anyway this is fantastic and I was wondering if we could expect an update anytime soon? |
tiedwithribbons chapter 6 . 8/30/2009 HURRY UP AND UPDATE ALREADY! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! |
Fliara48 chapter 11 . 8/11/2009 *sitting on the edge of my seat* OO *wide eyed* This is amazing! I love the way you write. And the story is different from the usual starscream fic, but it is absolutely BRILLIANT with so many possibilities! I can't wait to see where you take it. D *eager for more* |
tiedwithribbons chapter 10 . 8/11/2009 How's about an update? |