I'm not sure if you will ever return to this fic but I will hope you do! This is an amazing story and I would love to see it finished someday!

I just want you to knownhow much I enjoy this story...it hasn't been updated in a while, please don't say you're abandoning it :(

Pleas say you are going to continue this story at some point. I like the plot so far and your writing style. Please continue it.

xx

i figured it out right before they got to the healer. The ring to the head, and Lethe were enough.

You, madam, are a genious.

Hey! This is a very interesting and mind boggling story! I feel like I'm reading an actual book or watching a movie while I read this. I love that you made Jareth lose his memory- and in a more unique fashion that Sarah is trapped in the Underground with a pervy and mischievous Goblin King. I am so excited to read more- please don't abandon the fic yet, it is something that I always wonder how it could progress! How will Jareth recover his magic, his thrown, and his memories? Will Sarah tell him about their past? Will she accept her maturity and admit she was selfish as a child to wish away her brother? Please! I'm so full of questions that only reading more will answer!

An interesting plot premise, and I look forward to further updates. My only criticism (and only because it positively hurt to read it) is that 'Lethe' is not written by William Aggeler; it's by Charles Baudelaire, published in Les Fleurs du Mal. I assume Aggeler's the English translator of your copy?

As I said, otherwise enjoyed your four chapters, and will be intruiged where you take the fic.

R

Yay! This is excellent, and I've really enjoyed all of your stories! I hope that you have plans to update your WIPs soon, because they're wonderful!

Wow- really enjoying this already, beautifully written. Off to read more...

Yes! An update! I love this story, seeing an update always makes my day extra happy. This chapter was really good, the bit about the clock at the end was very well done and super mysterious, I am chock full of curiosity and you will have to update as soon as you can!

ohh you updated yay! i was wondering whats next in this story!

You're back! And you brought a shirtless Goblin King with you! Hoorah!

AH!

I thought I would have to call the cops on you! I was so worried after not knowing a word from you! Hope you're doing fine and dandy! Thanks for the wonderful chapter. I enjoyed it very much.

Intriguing - excellent mercurial characterization for both characters. And, "she was sure that they were standing so close he was getting her wet"... *snicker*

My dear, this was far too long in coming.

I didn't catch any spelling errors, so you get an A and a cookie for that phenom!

The last bit was really quite interesting. We've got a "What's done is done", so I'm thinking it's someone close to Jareth... or you could be tricking your poor readers and it's Abberon.

Your Jareth is well-written; I imagine that he would behave that way if he was an amnesiac.

The criticism: I'm not really buying Sarah's sudden attachment to Jareth. Yeah, he's hot, but less tan a day ago she tried to shoot him in the head.

The reviews I leave are absurdly long.

Please update at your earliest convenience

wow, wonderful story! update soon please :)