Sweet

How did you do this? How did you predict the end? How could you write something that beautiful and sad and-

So I went looking for the first Fringe fic and found this. Absolutely beautiful and how incredibly right you were, too.

Beautiful, beautiful writing.

i find it great how spot on you were with the title of this story lol.

Truly amazing! Shocked at how completely in character this is. Even after three seasons this would still be completely in character! Just. Wow. Just. Amazing!

I love this. 3

I do have one regret though: it is too short, I would have loved to read a little more. You did a great job writing this in 2008, even with season 3, you'd be totally in character. Well done !

So I thought I'd check to see if you'd favorited any Fringe fics I'd like to read and found your own!

It's awesome reading it these years later. It would still fit, perfectly and the image of Eve shimmering is now even more special. When you wrote future fic, you really were looking into the future. It's lovely, and I'm so glad you got me into the show at last :-)

I was rereading all your NCIS fic over the last few days and I found this. I'm only a recent inductee into the Fringe universe(s) and still somehow I've managed to tangle myself up into a multi-chapter epic of my own. This is lovely, heartbreaking and lovely. Where I'm on page 31, you've encapsulated an entire epic in only a couple hundred words. Nicely done, as always.

Woah.

This is seriously powerful and seriously thought-provoking. I'm in awe.

To think this is the first Fringe FanFic, and to think it's so entirely epic. You set the bar for all future ones really high.

I love the utter despair and glimmer of hope that fills this piece, the beautiful imagery that it evokes and the perfect characterization of our favorite duo and their future. No wonder why everyone's obsessed with giving them a daughter. No matter, I approve.

Great job. This is definitely going into favorites.

This is sad, but beautifully so. It certainly seems like a future that Fringe would willingly evolve into - or not-so-willingly. I quite like it.

Lucy

just simply brilliant.

Wow, this is really...striking. I love how futuristic is is, yet they're in a sort of primal setting, living on the edge, just trying to make it day to day. There's a hopeless tone to the story, but Eve (great name choice, btw) adds an element of hope. This is more mature writing than I've seen around ; it's refreshing. Your imagery was really strong. I thought it was a fantastic drabble, and it would be great if you could turn it into a longer story.

oh my... that was so, SO beautiful... and so sad! but sweet, bittersweet, i guess... very will written, and WOW was it powerful! you've almost got me in tears here! awesome job.