Wonderful little story!

Really well written with and excellent backdrop to set up the sexy funtimes of the cheeky young bride and her vulcan. I enjoyed the trip through their mutual memories in the dream state and her 'wanton' nature.

What a brilliant and wonderfully hot story you wrote! I can't believe I haven't read this sooner. Well done!

Like other reviewers, I loved your descriptive style. Yes, there were a few grammatical errors, but they were very minor as far as I can tell. Word choice is really what I'm concerned the second to last line, you stated that astrologers said it was the most beautiful sunset ever seen on the planet. Astrology was a form of divination in the Middle Ages. Star Trek is based in science. So, I think you were going for "astronomer.

this was gorgeous. fantastic.

signed,

onewhowatches :3

That was hot! I love what you've done with this pair.

I'm a huge Sarek/Amanda fan. Just loved this. I hope you are further inspired to write more stories with them.

Very very intense!

LOVE IT!

wow...just...wow.

I am now suffering from serious dehydration...and I don't think the drool on the keyboard is of any help...It has been a few months since I've read a story as deliciously detailed and slow paced as this one. Most romance fics leave me unfulfilled because there isn't anything in there that I haven't read previously. This fic...I was all...omg where's this gonna go ne-oh no she didn't! and..and what? *face hovers inches from screen*

*reads a few paragraphs*

*cue the H2O-Works...*

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I've now been staring at this review box for a good 6 minutes attempting to condense all my thoughts into a nice clean sentence...

It's not working...

So I'm simply going to submit this (before my head explodes into a pile of satisfaction) and clean up the mess I made. XD

Well Done!

It is shameful, SHAMEFUL that this story has not received more reviews! This is, by far, the BEST Sarek/Amanda story I have read! In fact, scratch that, it is the best Vulcan/Human one-shot I have read, period.

Your use of language and imagery is absolutely second to none in terms of delicate, slow-burning arousal, and that's really saying something considering the amount I read!

Great job, well done!

- Doc x

Good Lord! You're really, really good at emotional/sexual/arousing scenses. I was practically drooling. Great job. ;D

I really liked this Sarek/Amanda piece! It was done exceptionally well! The idea of Amanda 'molesting' Sarek in his sleep with his fingers was very amusing! That was a stroke of genius D

Very cute story! It was a very fun read! I think you should do more!

I loved this! The portrayel of Amanda and Sarek was very well done.

A beautiful look at Sarek and Amanda. I really enjoyed reading this story. Great development of the characters that fit perfectly with their portrayals on the television show. Well done!

Delicious, simply delicious! As a poor trekkie myself, I find the more intimate moments between inter-alien couples facinating! Especially Vulcans, it seems like all humanoid species suffer from the same weakness, now matter the logic, eh?