Why does Jacob have to not like Nessie. In truth, I really don't like this story. I am terribly and truthfully sorry. i like the NessieXJacob pairing. Overall, besides the hatred part, the story was good.

I loved this!

Someone else who just accepted Jacob/Nessie and dealt with it! Yay!

(I'm traumatized because I got virtually shot by fanfic friends for defending Jacob/Nessie, lol)

Wow, Opal, love it. It's different from mine, but still a bit similar. You know I love everything you write ;) I'd love for you to update this, but you probably won't.

I have to agree with you on the Breaking Dawn opinion, I really didn't like it. It was to fanfictiony for my tastes. Not that I don't like fanfiction, but published books should not be fanfictiony. In my opinion anyway. I really enjoyed this story though, even if it was Twilight ! Another almost L/J shipper, kinda. I thought it would be cute, but evidently Mrs. Meyer did not. :P Oh well. I love your AF Fics too! GO A/H! :D Kay, Bye! Review more of your storys later!

Honestly, I really did not want Jacob to imprint at all, and I'm very glad you wrote this piece. I can't see Jacob being entirely happy with imprinting, deep down. It wasn't his choice at all, he was forced. I mean, I'm happy enough that he's laid off the Cullens and such, but I just dislike the idea of him imprinting on Renesme. That was the only downside to Book II (which absolutely kicked ass).

I'll admit, though, that I was feverishly praying for him and Leah to become a two-wolf pack and run away together... -sigh- Didn't happen. -sighs again-

~Evelyn

I agree with your reasoning. Great writing, even though it had to be about the demon vamp child ;)