Wow! That was really interesting!

Noooo! Itachi why did you do that? Don't traumatize your little brother again!

This is really interesting

Beautiful story.

That was great!

Omg Sasuke thoughts are do funny! In surprised Itachi still talks to him! But the fact that he went back to the camp and stole a flute us hilarious

Wow, this fic is beautiful. You're an incredibly talented author.

I'm not a very good reviewer, but...

I loved this. Really. 1st person POV is normally something that sends me back-clicking pretty quickly - sometimes it's just something about the "voice" not feeling like it matches up with my notions of the character? - but... you rocked it. I really enjoyed the interactions (between Itachi and Sasuke, and between Sasuke and the Naruto delusion in his head!) and the characterizations, story was great, and I was just very happy overall to have read this.

Thanks for writing it!

Pure amazing awesomeness. That's what this story is. I loved every moment of the interaction between the brothers, hell, even the open ending was great.

Well done on this epic story.

Wonderfully written! And you've kept them well in character.

Keep writing

Cheers

nooo that could not be the end... :-(

very well written chapter although I have one critic point - concerning the height of itachi and sasuke - when sasuke is sixteen he is not taller than itachi-kun (in the naruto manga).

this chapter was great. now the boys are out...but sasuke is not right in his mind when he thinks he could truly kill his aniki. that will not be right...really.

I loved it when sasuke sleeps by itachis side to keep warm.. hehe

and this was so sad -

"I wish you could stay with me," Itachi whispered.

great chapter .

Ito say I really like your gen story. :-) It is amazing. I am always more into brotherly fluff and bonding than in true yaoi fanfictions were the only plot of the topic is that the seme will f*** the uke..o..O (ohh I can not read more sasunaru in the naruto fandom stories o..O were sasuke is the ultimative seme and naruto a crying baby o..O; god)

So it is so amazing to read a complex and wonderful written story like yours. It is really amazing how you can capture readers with your wonderful and interesting plot and writing style.

sasuke-chan and itachi-san are very interesting and complex charakters... it is amazing to read their thougts and how they feel; especially itachi. and I love the sarcastic remarks of sasuke hehe - he is so funny and sweet. I think all the hate sasuke-chan has for itachi will never kill his love for his aniki. the love sasuke has for his older brother will never die...although sasuke does not realize that yet.

I loved especially this paragraph in this chapter:

He would not have survived a day without Sasuke.

also itachi-san love sasuke-kun. I hope they will be live together happy in the future...it would be only fair that they will be able to start again and itachi should tell sasuke-chan why he killed the whole clan.

I would love to read more from you about sasuke-chan and itachi-kun...really...

wow this story is truly amazing. really. I adore it. my favourite paragraph was -

"You stole a flute," brother repeated. This time it wasn't so much of a question.

'Stop looking at me like I'm kleptomaniac!'

this was so funny... I had to laugh until I had tears in my eyes... amazing. I also loved the list sasuke made - about things that are more pleasant than itachi. hehe. and insane sasuke is really lovely... sasuke -chan halluzinating of naruto..lool amazing..

I love the brotherly dynamic. I love itachi-san and sasuke-chan and how they interact. it is amaszing. they are so in character... woow. I hope this story will have a sequel... great. absolut great.