You have completely captured Hibari's tone in the narative - not an easy thing to do in a humerous piece - well done! And that last line just makes the entire story! XD

I really like this, especially the ending, very Kyoya like.

edorphin god that was the best thing i ever read XD

yay fluff! This pairing needs more love. There hasn't been enough of these lately (at least, I haven't been able to find much w

oo fluf. beautiful.

where did you get the prayer from? so impressive!

and Hibari is so cute!

nice!

I'm not very good at Italian so the prayer kinda made my head spin when I tried to read it lol, but I got the basic idea. And of course, this story like all of your others was awesome. WELL DONE!