Ooh, very reflective in showing a bit of Percy's character. I got that before I changed schools. Now my younger sisters are "Renee's sister" :D I liked this bit "younger sib of Bill" it was a different way of saying Bill's brother" I wouldn't have thought of your way so: well done!

fuck this is good
its how i always imagine percy,so good on you!
keep it up!

Wow. That's a really cool song,

That was really original. I liked it.

That was sad. Poor Percy, I never imagined him that way. This song could have been about Ron or Ginny too, but that's just my opinion. Keep writing.

that's actually pretty damn good!

That is so sad. honestly I really love percy.

Most people would think of this as being more of a ron peom,but I like it this way, It's touching.

I really think it's pretty good, story to it? Please?

*glomps* That was ~awesome~! I loved that! And it was sooo Percy. Great verses, it had an awesome flow...that was just really frickin' cool! Great poem!