This was well written but I would have liked the story to continue, what would come of all of this? Interesting scenario and well written lemon!

-SLITH

This is how it should have went down and GSD also did this Kira and Cag stay together while Athrea is with Hawk bitch..

That was a long wait. I'd actually forgotten all about this. It was pretty good.

pretty it up

wow! took ya awhile huh lol jk

:D :D :D

I'm not sure what to make of this. I think I need to read more of it.

Twisted pairing. D I initially thought it WAS the pairing until I saw the episode where her father gives her the picture.

Regardless, you have strong dialogue.

yay your back!

cant wait!

plz for the love of kira and cagalli update!

this is really good!

Nice start even if i am a little disturbed by the pairing.

can i request you do a one-shot lemon story with Meyrin and Cagalli as the pairing? the plot being Cagalli interogating Meyrin to see if the red head has slept with Athrun but when Meyrin gets very descriptive about what she and Athrun did Meyrin and Cagalli end up having sex with the story ending with Athrun walking into the room ready to propose to Cagalli and finding her on top of Meyrin.

please comtinue your great writing.

Interesting so far, thank you for the mention of my story- makes me smile to see that it can inspire so much creativity. I look forward to seeing how this story will progress.

Alerting _

update soon yes? the story looks interesting.

Nitpick: If Freedom had been hit in the back by a beam, even a single shot, it would probably have been destroyed. The mobile suits built during the First Bloody Valentine war were all highly susceptible to beam attacks, and even the Gundams were equipped only with phase-shift armor, which can only block physical attacks.

That aside, I like the chemistry between your interpretations of the characters. I think you'll probably be able to write a pretty good story if you continue writing this. I look forward to seeing what you come up with.

This is good, I love it.