lol :D its good

Nice.

That's mean of Draco but hey its alot beter than making him OOC

haha good job, really funny!

LOL i found that quite funny even though at first he was using her! really great, keep it up!

I liked your story, weird I just verbally told you the same thing! my absolute favorite line is "Might as well get paid for it"! That was too funny! Later Gater - B

cute lol

LOL I loved it )

Felt really sorry for Pansy though (she's my favourite character!) x]

OOh one thing, in the UK, "Mum" is spelt "Mum", not "Mom" x] Just thought i'd let you know since HP is British )

Haha.

I wasn't expecting the story to be like this but I love it. :D

Keep writing.

I don't see anything that needs fixing, except the bit where Hermione's saying he can't even think like a sixteen year old, let alone act like one, because her wording seems forced. But a very cute little plot!

really good