This was a wonderful fic. Thanks for sharing!

Wow. That was incredible. So much detail. Perfect.

I loved it. I wish he could keep his powers and kick some wraith ass

This is a really well thought out and well written story, could not put it down.

I happy he's okay. But to be honest, I kind of wanted him to accend. There has only been one verison written before, and in that one Shepp descended immediately after his accension.

You. Are. Awesome...Seriously.
Wasn't planning to read this fic all in one go, but when I started reading it...I absolutely couldn't stop until it was finished! I have so much to say about this, your spot-on characterizations, the amount of research that you must have put into it, the fact that you're made of pure talent, but I'm afraid it wouldn't be terribly coherent at this hour. Anyway, I loved it. This is one of those stories that I'll read again and again.

(Sorry if this doesn't make much sense, I'm scribbling things down as I go)

Heee, I loved Rodney's reaction to John's powers - the rant about John being a janitor

'Ronon pushed off the wall and pointed at his feet. "You might want to wear some shoes." Oh yeah, higher brainpower his ass.' - Heh

You wrote John's general restlessness very well - I liked his soda analogy

Oh dear he's hearing thoughts, that's not going to end well (loved most of Rodney's thoughts, most were hilarious)

I haven't actually seen Tao of Rodney yet (I have an addiction, I only get 2 episodes a day a weekday and fan fiction calls to me, and :) ), and I was wondering how the hell this was gonna end; how they were gonna save John. The solution to it all worked for me, it didn't seem as deus ex machina as I was worried about (not that I expecting to be, 'cause your writing is better than that)

Loved the ending with the Sheppard and Rodney banter

(Thanks for the author recs by the way, I'll check them out)

Fantastic. That was just SO fanastic. It was realistic, riveting, and very well written. The emotions came through so clearly I could almost feel them, and the friendship between the characters was defined and important without being overdone and feeling manufactured. You nailed the characters, from Ronon's silent support and determination to Rodney being a panic attack personified. And I just loved John and your descriptions of events through his mutating point of view. I can't even tell you all the things I loved about this story, but can tell you that I will now go to your author page to look at your other work and your favorites!

Interesting and intriguing... very much a read of 'lets see just how close to the episode she goes and how far...'

I won't go as far as saying was better than the episode because McKay with superpowers was hilarious BUT almostascendedJohn was pretty darn good too and you wrote an excellent McKay reaction to it all

thanks for the engaging read!

Just found this wonderful gem of a story and I absolutely loved it! I kept thinking "Sheppard is really going to die!" and because the story was so well developed and you had pegged Sheppard so well (no self-pity, just doing what needed to be done to) that he was okay with deatg... and so was I. BRAVO! And you were so right to insist that he would not ascend - it's just not right for a warrior. Now on to read another of your fics! Keep them coming!

WOW. Just... wow. Can't believe this doesn't have more reviews, honestly. This is some of the best work I've seen on here-love your writing style. It was a very very interesting perspective on a 'what if' scenario? Loved every bit of it, kept me on the edge of my seat. Kudos.

This was really entertaining and just perfect. Good job.

John was guided out of the infirmary in a rush, McKay whispering to him the entire time. “Quickly! If we're out of earshot then we're not disobeying orders.”

I knew this would happen. They never know when to quit.

I don't like the underground. It's creeps me out; the smell,

the dampness and never mind what is probably down there...

:-(

This story was absolutely amazing..! It was so well though and written, it shows you put a lot of time and dedication to it...

I'm definitely keeping an eye out for more of your stories..!

This was a brilliant story, well written :) x