Lol what? At least give us a warning that this is slash/boylove/yaoi/gay story. I was taken aback by that Draco flirts (wut the heck) with Harry. Just what? It was out of nowhere.

Great story hope to see more soon.

fucken hell. warn us if its a homo story.
very few poeple wanna read some gay shit.

This is the third time I have enjoyed your as yet incomplete tale. I will make my plea, which I am sure you are familiar with already, to please complete your lovely story...

Now, with that out of the way, may I say I admire your very real writing ability. I really appreciate the talent you have for descriptive passages. Chapter one was a delight to read. Additionally, I am enjoying tremendously the development of Harry's relationship with the various aspects of elemental magic. You've packed quite a lot of intriguing concepts into you story, and it must be a daunting task to bring them all together.

I think it would be a shame to not complete such a delightful story; but, real life is always more important. Even if you don't finish, I want to say I truly appreciate your hard work and the tale you've written...

Pemberton

wow this is complication than the canon one just for this horcrux. but well, great chapters. hope u still countinue this. this is Gold!

Interesting, but I don't hold much hope of it ever being finished. Following it, just in case.

Although, it isn’t finished I love to reread this story because it’s just so good. I love the idea of mage Harry who is powerful but still struggles to achieve his goal, of saving as many as he can.
Also, I think it’s hilarious how jealously Draco wants Harry’s attention but fails so hard. Little spider sidekick is also cute.
Thanks for the awesome work so far.

Finally, you should put the fact that this is slash in the summary.

It's not that I dislike slash, even.

It's that you've written the characters as females masquerading as men.

Also, Veela and their descendants are female.
Get your shit together.

Yeah, no thanks.

This is a bit too stupid and needlessly feel-y.

I read Harry Potter because I like the whimsical nature of the world and the characters involved.

This is just a butchery of the setting.

Weird change to Draco's ancestry.

Why, though?

This is an interesting story. I never expected a Hufflepuff version of Harry to have so much hostility towards him.

Love this! Please update soon!

no homo please

I know you don't post here anymore. I haven't heard from you in 7 years so it seems odd to post a review now. However, I still love this story, I read it all the time. I thought of how you were doing and was wondering if you were okay. I hope you are

This started well, then went downhill rapidly. Completely unclear what is actually going on with Harry, which makes it all seem a little specious, a best.