Ahhhhhh! Write more! Please!

Aw! They can finally be together now. I LOVE IT!

Aww! This is so cute! :) Cute and good enough to end my fanfiction scouting day. Haha, thanks! :)

I love, love, love, love, love it! It's very well crafted, in both plot and language! The characterization is great too! You really pegged their personalities. Especially Jason.

I swear, that character will never cease to amuse me!

And I just love Nitchie!

I hope to read another Nitchie from you sometime in the future.

Hi again,

:) I'm reviewing one of your older pieces because it caught my eye and I was searching for more of your fantastic writing - hope you don't mind!

“Yeah, sex! Absolutely nothing to do with surprise Christmas presents whatsoever. Just lots and lots of sex!” Jason followed up, nodding his head fervently.

HAHAHA. Oh, Jason. And the bit about the rock, paper, scissors killed me too. Moving on..oh, Violet Hill..great song. (I'm reviewing as I go, so this may be a rather incoherent review. :P But that's nothing new, of course!) Oh! The "do you love me" bit was just perfect. Say the right thing, Nate! Okay, going back to reading so that I don't get distracted.

Done! Wow, okay. Well first off, I'd like to say HURRAY for Nitchie! I'm a huge fan - more so than Smitchie, anyways. But that may be partially because I think Nick and Demi would look cute in real life, too..anyways. I absolutely loved this (especially the beginning, for some reason). The whole thing was written so..easily, it seems. (I don't know if that makes sense, but it all feels really natural.) And the beginning bit was just so cozy and Christmasy - you could literally feel the childish Christmas joy and the warmth of the room with the snow coming down outside the window..I love Christmas. Haha, but this really captured the whole essence of it. And I certainly do not want to sucker-punch you. Just sayin'.

Great job again!

Love, Cami

That was really good!

I love NItchie! Glad to see you've joined the group :D

Loved it!

Fantastic. Nitchie is such a forbidden(sp?) couple and you wrote is so beautifuly. i had tingles in my stomach and tears down my face by the end. Asoulutley brillant. PLease for all us nitchie fans write more.

Lovelovelove it! I also love the pairings that aren't so obvious. You do a wonderful job on all your stories. :)

OMJH I was literally crying at the end that was so sweet! :D

Luv,

Drama Queen

This was...so cute. I felt like crying. Like, it made me all mushy inside.

I loved it!

Always,

luvschaylor4ever

THAT WAS LITERALLY AMAZING! I LOVE YOU FOR THIS! like LITERALLY! the best one shot ever! i was laughing so hard and crying and everything! god, nitchie rules.

if you love mitchie so much, you should read mine!

That was a cute ending. And a good story.

Kelly

Wow you have no idea how much I loved that story! It was amazing! Well done!

:):):)

Oh wow. I'm a complete NateMitchie freak now. Ha, you're right, Smitchie IS a thing of the past! :)

This was beautifully written. I love how you used vulgar (but raw) language to give Mitchie and her friends a more older, darker contrast to their 16-year-old lives. Love it!