that was wonderful! haha, i need to read stories like this sometimes! had me grinning :)

this is the best humor yet! XD

from your imouto,

Miyano Ran-chan

lol, but yours is my favorite kind of insanity! xD

I loved Ayumi's role in this story; her sudden infatuation with froggy Shin was hilarious. "Come back, cutie! Come back!" XD

And when Shinichi spotted Ran's "extremely hot pink panties," I, well... to be honest, I don't think I've ever chuckled a "WTF?" to a fic before.. XDD It was extremely random, yet extremely funny simultaneously. And Shinichi's subsequent (and perverted) resolution to remain a frog was a very IC reaction, oddly enough. XD

Great little oneshot! ;D

lol! this is random! hands cookies over for making such a random story.

LMAO! That's funny!

That's was funny and cute. XD LOL.

2 WorDs...

HI-LAR-IOUS

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GREAT

KeeP on Writing!

Buahahahaha... But that's really creative and funny!

*giggle* If you think your story is weird, wait 'til you read the one of Shinichi being half-alien XD

Nah, I like it, it's not as bad as other stories. There are some that make even less sense no matter how realistic they are x)