Cute and funny. Nice one-shot :)

lol. This was brilliantly written. It was short but sweet, and perfectly captured their relationship.

I love the way you write. I hope you can write more of Tris and Niko stories. They are great friends. You know what would be cool: A one shot in which Tris has done something bad, (maybe tried to control a storm)and Niko get mad. ) He is adorable when hes mad because its really their love (as friends) that makes him act like that. It would be fun to see it from a third persons point of view. An ordinary Innkeeper has just seen on of the most powerful mages in a rage, and get beaten in an agrument. It would be hilarious.

*giggles* Win for Tris!

Well written. Fun read.

very good. i like this friendship too

Very nice! Tris and Niko were portrayed perfectly; the ending is my favorite.

Def. Do more. You do Niko so well...

lol thats cute. :) You should write more! :)

Aw...I love the Tris and Niko relationship. Nice job!

I love you :D

I love anything about Tris and Niko and this story was just so awesome. Great job!

conveys Tris perfectly :)

so cute! please write more of these.

lol this was really cute