Thank you for writing this story, for years I have searched a story about Rachel and Harvey and what they would do in an universe where they both survived. They are both such complex characters and deserve more stories about them.
Their synergy in your story was perfect, is there any hope of your writing another? I would love to read it.

Oh gosh I ship it so hard. Harvey/Rachel is such an otp. Beautifully written

Oh, this is excellent! I especially love the line about Hades and Persephone. Everyone is true to character, and the ending is just perfect. Excellent job!

-Tai'shar

Odd. Pretty good. Feels like how it could have ended, just negative enough while still being a kind of happy end. Well done.

Ohmygoshthisstorywasamazing! I was near to tears when Rachael died. Thanks so much for writing this!

I liked it, an I agree with you, I expected to see ALOT more fanfics about these two.

Great story! I agree that there aren't any good Harvey/Rachel story, and I'm still hoping someone will write one where Rachel lives and Harvey doesn't become Two-Face. I'd love to see how that would change the Batman 'verse. hint, hint. Great job.

"She has just a smidgen of selfishness, and a rather human desire for personal happiness, that I think she would still be with Harvey even if he was somewhat more twisted."

Wow. I already really liked your story but your interpretation and your thoughts in the end. Wow, they were also really amazing! :)

Ah another Harvey fan! Hoorah! Aaron is quite good looking (as all my friends and family know) and I love two-face as well! And Harvey and Rachel were a great couple, TDK made me love them so much! And it made me sympathize for two face. Excellent fic!

Ah another Harvey fan! Hoorah! Aaron is quite good looking (as all my friends and family know) and I love two-face as well! And Harvey and Rachel were a great couple, TDK made me love them so much! And it made me sympathize for two face. Excellent fic!

Omg... I loved this so much.

I LOVED your Two-Face, though sometimes he spoke a little too proper, but it was very good. Your characterization of him was raw and moving. This was certainly not a wangst fic, which makes this fic all the more awesome.

I agree about The Joker, hate how popular The TDK Joker is. He's one-dimensional and flat. Interesting, but one-dimensional. I didn't mind at first, then I realized he was all the media and reviewers would talk about, watched the movie, and found out he had 98% of all TDK fanfics.

I really would like to see more fics with Harvey or Harvey/Rachel. They are my Batman OTP and I liked Harvey Dent/Two-Face more than The Joker in the movie.

Great story! I absoltuely feel in love with your version of the story! I love how you portrayed Harvey and Rachel's relationship in the end! It was sweet the way Rachel was trying to figure out what she should do... Great job, and I love Aaron Eckhart also!

wow. I'm not fully interlectual enough to fully understand this but it is mind-blowingly good! I can't really add much to what the other reviewers have said but amazing work!

Please right a sequel to this story. It was so good and there are hardly any Rachel and Harvey stories out there

~siriushermionelover

This is great! Harvey is a rather rare sight in this section, very nice to see a good story about him.