Good chapter and the song at the top is fall for you right ? Good song. Anyways good job -

Oh...thank you...am so looking forward to reading it...ps I really like your writing style..

Nope ...all the chappies are pretty fabulous...

So far...I love it hopefully u will finish it...love to read it ...very well written

hahaha oh wow now that was funny:P Good chappie

Really nice story looking forward to reading the followup

Omg, that cliffhanger had me reeling... No Edward with Jacob? / I'm going to cry... I'll be heading to the sequel in hopes of them with a continued future.

You're the best i feel so late reading this

omg... like ive been living and loving this story for like the last like 3 hours and then its like "who is bella?" and i was like OMFGGGGG! damn slut, ruining this epic story! :( lol great work, really high quality. and i love the songs u choose :)

keep it up :)

As Rose rejoined her husband they both smiled with anticipation, which should have been a tip-off, but Jake didn't notice as he tore at the decorative paper and pulled at the first box. It was kind of small and black with no label, everyone eyed the box curiously, of course Rose and Emmett's smiles just grew. Jake opened the box and much to his amusement and chagrin he retrieved a pair of black fluffy handcuffs. He held them up with one finger and eyed his friends, "You're kidding, right?"

Rose shook her head, "Nope."

Emmett laughed, "They're made with reinforced steel. The kind they used to build hurricane proof houses, like this one. I mean, we all know things can get a little...rough."

Jake shook his head, "I hate you both." He smiled.

Rose smirked and arched her perfectly shaped brow, "You'll thank us later."

lol
gr bella that bitch. poor jake

Jake sighed, "Alice," he looked at her as if she were slightly retarded, "what did we talk about on the way here?"

She didn't hesitate in answering, her memory was still slightly bruised from the conversation, "That you wanted to sleep with Edward."

Jake nodded and smiled, "Good. Now," he paused and looked back to the shorts, "can you picture me in those and Edward saying 'no'?"

A wicked smile of understanding appeared on her lips, "Why, Jake, I am so proud of you." They laughed as they entered the store.

lmfao
hm so jake is getting sick for being away from his pack I"m guessing...
love that he went shopping with alice btw

Edward smiled down at him, "Well, of course. It takes quite a bit of brain power to fetch big sticks doesn't it?"

Jake pulled himself out from under Edward's arm, "Yeah, okay. See if I talk to you for the rest of the day."

lol
Jake shook his head and pulled himself from Edward's grasp, "One of these days…" he trailed off.

Edward raised his brow once more, "Yes," he encouraged him.

"One of these days I'm going to bite you."

"Careful, boy," he stepped closer to Jacob, "I may have to put you down?"

Jacob stepped toward Edward, leaving only a few inches between them, "You could try."

Edward nodded, "Maybe I will," he didn't say anything else as he turned and headed for the kitchen.
lmfao just love the dog cracks haha
"Aw, if the big bad wolf afraid of the mean vampire's scary driving?"

Jake's eyes narrowed, "Ass," the word was hushed, but still clear.

lol
darling I love dawson creek so I enjoyed the whole 'pacey or dawson' question. And I love Dawson but he's too controling and possesive and goes crazy. I love her with Pacey way more. Though I felt bad for dawson when joey and pacey got together at first because they were both HIS best friends.

Jacob narrowed his eyes suspiciously and he pursed his lips in a playful manner, "You know," he paused to make sure he had Edward's attention; he did, "this whole following you everywhere thing is really beginning to make me feel like a dog."

Edward laughed loudly at this and turned to Jacob, "If it makes you feel better or more like you're in your place I could get you a little collar," he laughed at Jake's hardened expression.

Jake glared daggers at Edward, "If you weren't so freakin' hot, I swear..." he trailed off.

Edward kinked a brow and looked to him, but continued on toward his destination, "You'd what?"

Jake's eyes narrowed in thought, "I'd...well...I'd...I'd bite you."

Edward laughed again, "Oh no, Kujo. Down boy!"

Jake froze and pulled his hand from Edward's, "You know sometimes-"

Edward didn't let Jake finish before he pressed his lips to Jake's, he allowed them to remain long enough to throw Jake's train of thought, "You were saying?" he whispered, his cool breath floating up to Jake's lips.

Jake's eyes remained closed a little longer than necessary, his entire ability to think of move disappeared from the feel of Edward's lips, "I..." he looked down at Edward, "I forgot."
lmfao thats so cute. hahaha
Jacob's lips turned up into a small smile and he looked to Edward, "So," his voice was low, "is this where we'll be sleeping?" He wiggled his eyebrows suggestively.

"No," Jake's face fell, "this is where you'll sleep."

"Oh," Jake was obviously disappointed.

Edward smiled, "I didn't say I wouldn't be with you."

Jake looked up with new hope, "But I thought you said..." Jake trailed off as things became clear. Edward didn't sleep, "Ha," he faked a laugh, "You're funny."

Edward shrugged casually, "I try."

Jake forced a smile, "Well stop."

lol

"That's alright," he breathed out, "I've always been more of a hands on type of learner."
lol

i don't see why edward seems to surprised that everyone knows about jake and him and why he blames alice..because they are vampires hun...I'm sure the vampires 'his family' heard there whole conversation and everything else lmfao

good chapter though

loved the alice teasing it was cute

Edward and Jake didn't speak for a moment, they just stared at each other, but Jake broke the silence, "So I'm on my deathbed and you go for lunch, nice," Jake's tone was playful, but he could tell Edward didn't see it that way

lmfao

"Do you like it hot or cold," Edward looked back at him.

Jacob smirked wickedly and arched a brow, "Cold," he slowly pulled his bottom lip in with his teeth.

lol
Edward opened his eyes, obviously that wasn't going to help his situation.

"Edward," Esme's voice called to him on the other side of the door. That did the trick. Edward walked over and opened the door.
haha doesn't it always?
Jake smiled wickedly, "Edward," his grip on the towel that hung loosely from his waist lessened and the towel fell to the floor, "Oops," he said in a innocent voice. Both boys stood completely still, Jake's smile never falter, Edward's eyes straining to remain on Jake's face, "aren't you going to get that for me?" Jake pouted as a plea.

Edward said nothing for a few long moments, he just stood still as a statue, but then the magnificent statue came to life as his arms out stretched, "Here,"

Jake frowned, "Fine, don't play along," he spoke in a playfully disappointed voice

lol aw poor Jake