| Reviews for Fixing Dusk |
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  Guest chapter 8 . 6/2/2019 It's unfortunate that so far Jacob hasn't been man enough to admit he sanctioned Edward's actions. Good story line. |
 O2Shea chapter 28 . 10/29/2016 Nice. Enjoying the story of Jacob's imprinting. Love that Bella is still his best friend. |
| O2Shea chapter 20 . 9/25/2016 You did such a super job of writing Esme! I feel that she & Carlisle tend miniimalized in fics unless the fic is about them, but you took make her real & vital. Thanks! |
| O2Shea chapter 19 . 9/25/2016 I'm glad you left this chapter in. Its beauty & serenuty make a nice contrast with what is coming. |
| O2Shea chapter 16 . 9/22/2016 Loved the title & the symbolism! |
| O2Shea chapter 14 . 9/21/2016 Great job on the relationships here. They're perfect! |
| O2Shea chapter 13 . 9/21/2016 The flow is not bad here! |
| O2Shea chapter 11 . 9/20/2016 Every author has favorite chapters. Personally, I think yiu used the ending of this one to put an incredible twist I've never read elsewhere on Bella's talent! |
| O2Shea chapter 7 . 9/20/2016 Very good descriptions of the hunt... & also the OTHER hunt & its aftermath. |
| O2Shea chapter 4 . 9/20/2016 Wow! Excellent segue! Just when I thought we were in for a delay, Destiny in the form of a rattlesnake inevitably moves us on... Good plotting! |
| O2Shea chapter 2 . 9/19/2016 Nice wording! Really like the way you write! |
| O2Shea chapter 1 . 9/19/2016 I enjoyed this beginning. It was clearly written by someone more mature than the averave fan fiction author. Looking forward to seeing where you take us with this fic... |
| BridieM chapter 39 . 5/14/2016 I found this excellent story by accident. Thank you for writing it. Thank you for leaving it up so that it can be discovered.. It is a gem. |
| LadySixx chapter 38 . 10/8/2015 This was a very good story, thanks for sharing it! |
| Tess chapter 38 . 2/16/2014 Thank you for sharing. :) |
