heyy I know I'm a little late HAHAH but pls update! looking forward to the next chapter :)

-kirsten :)

Love the story! :))

wow. directed here from the zoidian, and i gotta say... that was really good! a little (a lot) sad, but definitely worth the read.

the "we have to take reese" thing seemed a bit off... not something i'd imagine they'd do, even to raven, but it made for a great story.

keep writing. i understand it's difficult now, but it's well worth it.

try RP'ing. it's like writing a fan-fic, just less predictable ;)

I really enjoyed this story, it's well written and very interesting ] Keep it up, and I look forward to your next update!

FAN!

This is an overall well written story. I like how you made Van out to be almost villanous in the begining. Its a nice turn of events. And making Raven seem more like a misguided youth is a good change of perspective. All in all I like this story a lot and hope you continue it.

Wow. Van just seems cruel to me.

I like it. I think it's a pretty good start and I'm looking forward to see where you go from here.

The one thing I'm not a fan of is how fast the Breaker went down. To me, it seems pretty weak.

Interesting, I'm eager to find out what happens when Moonbay gets back to the others, snerk.

I LOVE YOU!

Thank you SO MUCH for the update! I was afraid you had given up on all of your wonderful Raven stories DX

This chapter was fantastic, I'm amazed at how consistant your writing style/characters have been after an entire year break! I love the character interaction, and your action scenes are always amazing, I can already tell I'm going to enjoy this next chapter, what with a new green-eyed organoid on the loose and after Raven...

And yeah, Raven is in trouble, again... "YES!" I mean "oh no"

XD

Well I can hardly wait to see where this story is going to go, I'm so glad you finally have a computer to work on! And please update some of your other stories too while you're at it if you don't mind me asking! :D

Thanks again!

~Tokonatsu

Excelente...

Later actualization, no way. if I'm wrong mine is 2 years old and I see that you update ... that gives me hope.

Great job.

Awesome you updated this story i thought you stopped this whole story all together...lol. hopefully you update sooner with the next chapter *dies* lol

Don't feel bad about the one year thing. At least you've been participating in the internet zoider community unlike me. And it was a huge treat to check my email to see you had responded to my last review and left us with a new chapter! :P

Well getting to the story... what more can I say that I haven't already said? Look at all the comments I've given you, copy, and paste here! Except that your writing style has improved and you continue to leave us with cliffhangers! But I suppose the cliffies and your writing is what keeps all of us coming back? xD

Can't wait for the next chapter, so update soon and good job with this one! :P And oh dear is everyone's favorite villainous, yet misunderstood organoid back?

Poor specula! And raven, i hope he's okay! Shadow ought to give raven his space, yet patrol around and make sure no one is there that shouldn't be. Hopefully moonbay didn't convince shadow to stay when he shouldn't have...that might only hinder him gaining his trust in moonbay back.

It was worth the wait, Rebirth. You came back strong! Am I sensing Raven's fate in the claws of my beloved organoid Ambient? And Zeke, he really did some damage these last few chapters. I just hope he survives. And what of Specula? She took a serious beatin'. I sense serious domestic violence. Call the police. :D

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Kudos, Rebirth. Excellent Chapter. Sorry it took a while to review, I got sidetracked. My beagle killed a squirrel last night. I couldn't believe it.

OMG OMG OMG OMG IT'S ZEKE HE'S GONNA ATTACK RAVEN!

HAHAHAHA... oh shit...