Awww. :3 That was really sweet!

Just one quibble, though- in the part:

"Kakei-kun, Mizumachi-kun, I'm so glad I managed to run into you." He wiped several stray, soaking locks of hair away from his face and opened his mouth to say more when ((Mizumachi)) interrupted him.

"Sena, what are you doing without an umbrella on a day like today?" He moved forward so that Sena was a bit more protected from the precipitation.

Shouldn't that Mizumachi be Kakei instead? It seems more in-character for Kakei, and it makes more sense in the context of the next section:

"Oh, well, I had forgotten my umbrella at home this morning, and when I left Deimon after practice it really didn't seem like it was going to end up raining." Sena bashfully rubbed the back of his neck and Mizumachi clicked his tongue.

"You'll get a cold like this." He said, tone mirroring the one Kakei had used only moments before.

Awe! So cute! I just recently got into Eyeshield 21, and I found this completely adorable!

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Miz

Sena is really adorable!

I love kakei and mizumachi too

If im not mistaken, in japan you usually share an umbrella with the one you like right? So, that means they make the perfect OT3 XD

Ahh! I didn't realise I'd stolen the title of one of your stories! It wasn't intentional, it was just the first thing that came to my head when I'd finished the chapter!

I wouldn't worry too much however because your story is so much better than mine TT_TT Sena is so cutely oblivious in this and Mizumachi is just a big a kid as usual. Adorable story and very well written! _

so freakin cute, I love you for writing this, this is one of my fave OT3's

Threesome...Threesome.

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Oh so cute! Oh so cute! This was so fluffy, I'll probably need to brush my teeth an extra ten minutes tonight! And it was wonderful, too!

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Kakei's so sweet XD (Kakei/Sena is my second favorite pairing -3-)

It kind of sucks knowing what happens to poor Mizumachi during the Shinryuji game. Ah well that was a fun episode for Mizu/Sena fans though (though I wish Kakei had been there more .. or maybe Shin... XD)

Awesome job as always :D

Kakei/Sena/Mizumachi

*A* Excuse me while I sit here in awe that there is finally something for it.

Cute, but short.

I think we need some more interaction. ;d