Reviews for Incentive
justanotherdreamgirl chapter 1 . 4/18/2015
That was so good! Loved it! But oh my god! I can't believe Winry said that! But still that was really good. I liked when Ed kissed Winry on her forehead! So cute!
Sfss chapter 1 . 4/8/2015
oh my Gosh that Apple pie line! I totally did NOT expect Winry to say that! XD
seireidoragon chapter 1 . 3/6/2015
Oh my gosh that was brilliant!
luluhrh chapter 1 . 11/4/2014
oh really. . . *evil smirk* Winry, you naughty, naughty girl. poor Ed was paralyzed!
KaChan84 chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
Really good, the ending really cracked me up!
ec-writes chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
Oh my God. I love this.
Ed and Winry's awkwardness is just perfect. I love everything that went on in this. Your imagination and writing are great.
jaclynkaileigh chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
OH HELL I WISH IT WOULD HAVE ENDED LIKE THAT LOL
Dance along the light of day chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
haha, I looove it.
TheMistOfThePast chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
this was so great!

i love it to bits!

made me laugh so much!

thank you for writing this!
envyisawesome chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
NAKED IN BED! sick, gross, perverted, must i go on?
it's simply me chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
I rememer watching the brotherhood episode of this :D it would have been awesome if it ended this way! Another perfectly written story!
LuckyBubbles chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
I luvv it ur rght it wuld b better this way
WizKid94 chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
Oh why, oh WHY didn't this happen in the actual chapter! Bwahaha! This was perfect! I love your EdWin stories. Keep up the good work!
kayy christine chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Haha, of course it would have been better if it ended this way! That was really cute, I enjoyed reading it.
vucizalis chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
I wish Chapter 84 had been like this.
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