I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

Hm, I am quite sure that a torn entrance ould be quite dangerous. You said that they continued having sex afterwards, but that wouldn't be safe, would it? It had take time for the injury to heal and if not let alone it could get infected quite badly. And honestly who would want an infection on that place? It sounds like it would be very troublesome indeed.

Oh and by the way that was very kinky. So much for furries being popular :D

I don't like how shiro is always impatient and hurts ichigo. Also the way your ichigo submits seems really fake and ooc. Also none of your sex sciences are different it's always forced molestation and kissing, a quick prep and then fucking. You've only done things a little different a few times. What about blow jobs, toys, the waiting game, different positions? The sex is also way to short.

Hahahahahaha Ichigo just said to Shiro STUPID CRAZY LOVER hahahahahaha * cough cough * almost chokes * OMFG IT MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD I ALMOST CHOKED AND DIED HAHAHAHAHAHA OMFG HAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHA OMG * cough *

What was the song I didn't get all the lyrics so I don't know TT ' - '

I like Shiro it sounds cool but his new name does to WHICH ONE WILL I PICK!? SHIT I DON'T KNOW FUCK THIS SHIT DAMN IT !

OH GOD

Aw, I feel a little sad for Shiro. Ichi doesn't believe him after he confesses. Thanks for the chapter.

PLEASE, CONTINUE THIS! Thanks!

is there anymore to this story or no? (My king) I would love to read the rest

X3 This had me fangirling the entire time X3 I love you man!

Oh my god yes! YEs YES! (Do you think he take both of us at the same time?) Omg I love you!

Hollow Shirosaki (the monstrous lizard looking hollow that comes out when Shiro takes over Ichi's body) is Shirosaki and Hollow Ichigo is still Ichigo, just with the mask on and Shirosaki's powers.

Taikei very inventive.

waa tu fanfic me gusto mucho, estuvo muy bueno, espero que no dejes de escribir sobre esta pareja, por que soy muy fanática de ellos, (tengo un amor loco, obsesivo, compulsivo, ciego por Ichigo desde que lo conocí , y solo lo puedo ver con Shiro y nadie mas) gracias por escribir, en verdad que lo disfrute mucho, nos vemos!